good story keep it coming please can't wait for the next chapter!

I'm enjoying this quite bit. I really like the way you worked all three sets of characters into a single plot line. The only negative I have is that you sometimes leave out words. I don't really have anything bad to say about the story at all.

i'm surprised such a well-written fic only has 1 review!

You have fabulous characterization, with a good grasp on the mental processes of the person speaking. That, combined with good grammar, knowledge of the proper way to punctuate, and awesome spelling skills makes me completely floored that people aren't reading this, begging/threatening you for more, and then praising it to the rooftops.


i'm totally doing all 3.

See like for yhe first chapter I can hear Christopher Judge's deep Teal'c voice, which means you did a good job.