Brillant! I do so love stories like this! It's like DN Angel and who doesn't like DN Angel?

I LIKE this! I really REALLY do! Combining DNAngel and OHSHC is such a great idea! :3 I can't wait to see what happens next. I loved the thing with forget-me-nots!

Update soon!

Please let it be a Twin x Haruhi pairing! It just seems so right with this setting. Onegai!

lol, I just love that cookie scene. When I read the bit she was eating cookies, my first thought was that the twins were going to swoop down and take a bite! lol

Love the story, kinda reminds me of DN Angel but yet it's totally different! Please update again soon!

wha xD
when i read the first chapter i thought 'wow, looks really much like dn angel xD'
but i really like it! please update soon ;-)

I really love this it is very interesting can't wait to read more! ^_^

This was an interesting and well written take on an Ouran Au. I'd very much like to read more, as such is incredibly hard to find!

for some odd resone i knew that was comeing but what will she do next up-date plz

YAY, xD.
I thought this alert email was a joke, and I had already read this chapter. But I didn't, and even though I'm late in reading..

Lovely symbolism (?) you had here. The forget-me-not. How mysterious. Hehe.

The only thing that bothers me is this line: They approached Haruhi. (first)
One can assume from the previous sentence, that they are already approching her -- considering that they " walked toward the young Commander". (second)
So, "They approached Haruhi" sounds a bit redundant. But if you changed the second, then it would work. Something like..

" The twins had their arms around each other's shoulders, both holding somewhat sly looking smiles.

They approached Haruhi. "


Maybe, I don't know. Hope this helps, and I didn't confuse you. And if you don't like my suggestion, feel free to ignore it.

Waiting for the next update! Awesome job.

you have *got* to be kidding me...heeheeheeheeheeheehee...

This was a really good story!I really like that you did a cross over with DN Angel and Ouran! Please Update Soon...

that was really really good! please update soon!

GREAT CHAPTER!! LOVED IT!!

LOVE THIS FIC! I'm adding this to my favorites!...its ok,sometimes pairings just get so many that you don't know which ones are cuter. As for the action scenes,when you read over the chapter just make a few adjustments that you think you might need and you'll be fine. You've got long chapters and an interesting story line so far,so your doing pretty good. Can't wait for the next chapter!

*still giggling*
Poor Haru-chan, i love that cookie part overall a good chapter, needs more romance! nah j/p i think things are going rather smoothly, but this one was a bit confusing maybe its because i really bad with names *shrugs* who knows, may i suggest a bit more lenght?
KWAH.
HAPPY YEAR OF DAH BOAR.
~L.N~

did u know i was really lazy and didnt wanna log in but this fic made it worth it.
two words: update! okay i say twice!~ UPDATE UPDATE!!
kk i think u get the idea that ima in love with this. :P