This is hilarious, I like the way that you did this. :) Great job.

I think this had the most epic ending ever!

At first the format for this story confused me, but I eventually got the hang of it and decided I liked it. I'm not sure if you're poking fun at some of the other Spike/Ed stories out there (I haven't read too many of them), or if you're just having fun. But either way, this was very humorous, cute, and enjoyable to read, although a tad short. Nice work! :)

Classic! . It was great for a laugh. Thanks!...Ew, sticky, gooey, everywhere!

ROTFLOL wtf lmao omg that was so random and weird lol

Very short and sweet indeed.

well that was...intresting...LMAO

Weird, and I can't say I really liked it... but I can say you did a good job. But hey, what can I say? I'm not a big E/S fan, I just wanted to venture out in the great unknown. It was kinda funny at the end

*grins* I gots one idea as to what Ed was doing... Great fic!

pretty cool. Oh and to the other reviewers, this fic would make Spike about 32. A lot of people would say this is sick, but I think it is just funny! Great style. I love it when someone can write a "lemon" and keep it mild and humorous like this

this is awsum. Ed- ed is cool. Kat loves all episodes with her. kat think Edward is funny!

lol wow... yea i can certainly picture Ed talking like that while they're doing the do.

That was funny and cute at the same time.

Heh, funny stuff. But if Ed-Ed is 18, what age was Spi-person?

AHAHAA!

lol.

lovely ficcidy.

this is my first cowboy bepop story i read.

i like how the writin' style is set out.

great stuff