Reviews for A Present For Calleigh

Reviews For: A Present For Calleigh

C.H.E.A.R. 2007-03-30 ch 1,	abuseI completely loved it! Keep up the good writing!
supercsi4 2006-12-29 ch 1,	abuseWonderful, wonderful story! I loved it!
demolished-soul 2006-12-29 ch 1,	abuseTerrific job! I think this is the only Christmas fic I've read AND liked! Is there a New Year's one up next?
StevieWolfe 2006-12-29 ch 1, anon.	abuseHiya luna! I'm elisa, your personal translater! You already know what I think of your ff! They're wonderful and this is very funny, too! byebye a big kiss elisa
Lilith 2006-12-27 ch 1, anon.	abuseAwesome job, Luns! So cute and hot and beautifully written! Thanks for being so talented! ;)
Dutchie15 2006-12-27 ch 1,	abuseLuns, you made it! I failed my Christmas fic, but now I'm setting for New Year. But you made it and I love it! It's so cute! I mean, mistletoe is classic and you still make it special. Not overdone. And aww he didn't dare to give her present! melts
Moony's Lady 2006-12-26 ch 1,	abuseLuna, I've run out of words for you... You're so damn good! It was nice to see a CaRWash Christmas story, but it was great to see it was yours. I enjoyed every single bit of it, especially these lines: “It seems like a thousand years have past.” She said, placing it back on the shelf, then turned to him. “How can two years pass so quickly?” “Actually, it was in June, so that makes it one year and a half.” He précised. --> OCD rules! ^^ “Someone loves you.” she quipped brightly studying the three different front pictures. Ryan felt his cheeks burning as she opened the first card, scowling. No, Cal… Someone loves you. --> this sounds impressively like Ryan. Unluckily, Calleigh decided to glance down at the table again in the same moment Ryan was reaching out for the small box, leaving him with no alternative than confronting his bête noir and finally put an end to his recently found Christmas tradition to sit down and fight his yearly little battle against it. Besides he was really tired of losing. --> lol, so cute! It was only a gem drop hanging to a thin silver chain, but the look in her eyes gave away a delight her frozen features couldn’t seem to mirror. --> AW! Ryan knew he shouldn’t have let that happen, he knew now it had started, he would never get enough. It was amazing how powerful a kiss could be. --> Perfectly worded. You did an excellent work with this fic. I hope you're writing a New Year's one, now.
sandersidle 2006-12-26 ch 1,	abuseI loved it! You used mistletoe!! YAY! dances around That was awesome! :D
cpneb 2006-12-26 ch 1,	abuseThis is a wonderful story! Now, I'm going to have to go back and read the rest of your work; obviously, I missed something wonderful: = A weird sensation tickled him around his heart as she brought her hair up to let him fasten the chain around her neck. He saw her skin crawl when his fingers brushed it. The tickle in his chest became stronger. Some white blond strains had escaped from her hands and lay softly along the sinuous curve of the nape of her neck. “Done.” He said, shivering at the inappropriate thoughts rising inside his mind. Calleigh turned around beaming, the pendant twinkling on her décolleté in the dim light of the living room. Her own eyes were nonetheless shiny. “You look beautiful.” He commented, trying to fix in his mind every single detail of that delicious view. “Thanks.” She faced downward with a flattered grin. “I wish I got you something, too.” A low laugh escaped from him. He shook his head and reassured her. “You did.” Calleigh raised a brow questioningly and tilted her head. “You’re smiling.” He said. “That’s all I wanted, this Christmas.” = This passage made the story for me: I could see her skin crawling...and I know what he was thinking (BAD RYAN!). thanks for bringing this...cpneb

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