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| Lord Stingdingdingdingdingw... 2007-01-26 ch 1, | abuse...Shanks died? If this wasn't such a cute story I would have to smack you upside the head! But anyway, very nice touch. |
| MadamPhantom1891 2007-01-10 ch 1, | abuse"crying his rubbery little heart out." heh funny but i mist say curse u my nikki for being able to write kissy scenes i cant seem to do it:(:(:(:(:( |
| HouseyWousey 2006-12-30 ch 1, | abusesad and cute at the same time and it's good to see another ZoLu fan out there. there are so few... anyho. It was cute! And if people say it wasn't, well stick your tongue out at them and then kick them in the shins. -grin- Nicely written, and Shanks' death was a little unexpected, but it worked in nicely. A very cute fic! |
| Holly 2006-12-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseaw cuteness! |
| Clarobell 2006-12-26 ch 1, | abuseNaw, thanks for the present! It was lovely! I can't believe you actually went through with killing Shanks O_O you shocked me! I don't think I could kill him. This was written nicely and of course we all love the ZoLu! Well done on your first fic! I'll give yu some pointers for any future fics if you like! *grin* One more time, thanks for the present! |