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| ZoeE927 2008-07-19 ch 3,  | abusei like this. good idea. keep writing |
| Lola12 2007-12-13 ch 3, anon. | abuseplease update soon. Bend it like Beckham is the best movie ever and I love reading your fanfic! |
| CaitlinCWIU130 2007-12-03 ch 3, anon. | abuseAfter watching this movie I was also curious as to what would happen if Jess agreed to marry Tony. It is a good idea. Although Joe seems a little desperate as to stop Jess form marrying someone else and rahter her marry him, it is a good idea. |
| Victoria 2007-09-08 ch 3, anon. | abuseYou're a good writer, and the story so far has movenment, but I would suggest longer chapters. If you only have one chapter (which you could easily condense your first three into), that's okay. Longer chapters have better continuity. Don't post until you have enough to make it worthwhile, and I personally dislike having to go to the next chapter after reading for less than thirty seconds. Anyway, keep up the good writing :-) |
| OTHlover04 2007-07-19 ch 2, | abusethat was good!:) |
| lexxygoth 2007-07-13 ch 2, | abusei really like it but i think that you should rewrite it and make it longer cause i really like it. brill! |
| sicilybelle 2007-05-14 ch 2, anon. | abuseooh come on you need to add more you can not leave it like that add more fast please |
| sicilybelle 2007-05-03 ch 2, anon. | abusesad when to people who are right for each other can not be together poor kids :o( update pronto please |
| ms jockey writer 2007-04-21 ch 2, anon. | abuseexcellent! more ASAP plz! |
| fishertowers 2007-01-20 ch 2, | abuseGood Story! Try to have less speaking and more narrative bits though. But that is just a suggestion. All in all a great story! Keep Writing! |
| missedwithyoureyes 2007-01-20 ch 2, | abuseYAY! A Bend it LIke Beckham sroy...YAY! |
| PickyFan 2007-01-02 ch 2, | abusethis is really cute! PMS! |
| x0emz0x 2007-01-02 ch 2, | abuseGood so far. Poor Joe =[ Update soon! x |
| Linn 2007-01-02 ch 2, anon. | abuseI always wanted one of these stories. I hope you contiue it! |