lovely story! i read the same story of it from you other account on ! love it lvoe it love it!:))

Very good story. The ending surprized me as it was uncommon to anything I've read before, but I sincerly enjoyed it.

You kept every one very true to charecter the whole way through and your skills as a writer are very good.

Thank you for taking the time to write this story, and I look forward to reading any new material.
-Asiera

These are realy short chapters.

This is one of my favorite chapters. I am a complete vaseshipper, and I would love to read more Atem and Mana fanfics. It would be great if you would write more. If you want to rewrite a more fitting ending, please, DO IT! I'm working on a long sequel to Yu-Gi-Oh! myself. I just started publishing today. It's called Yu-Gi-Oh: Thief's Revenge. If you would read it, that'd be great.

I'm kind of a stickler for KT's rules, since he's the real author. I try to stick to his "rules" and storyline. But that's another story...

Truthfully, I wish that he and Mana hadn't run away at the end. I mean, this is ATEM(U) we're talking about. The Pharaoh/Yami Yugi! He doesn't run away from anything! Otherwise... I LOVE IT! FANTASTIC STORY! Could you write more?

so romantic i mean they ran away together just to be together-cries-they really love each other in this story if only they did like each other in the show ooh well i really wish u can write more

awesome story

sweet! I typed in mana and this thered up!

i love this story its in my faves!

Than u for wrinting this! It's awesome and beautiful and very interesting!! I really loved the end because is not a common ending...at first i thougt he was going to marry her and she'll become queen...but instead they fled!! FREE! very good story, congratulations!

This Fanfic is so Good ! i like reading long stories, and Atemx Mana are hard to find. Thx for writting this ! ^^~*

I have to say this story is a wonderful story, but suffers from one problem...

Why did you have to discontinue and delete the sequel?!?
I would have loved to have known what happened next.

wowowowowowowowowowowowowowowow!
This story is AWESOME. So do you like the ManaxAtemu pairing to. So do I. This is deffienetly going to my faves.

i love it
it's so romantic
i'm just about to read the sequel ;)

SEQUEL!

Vegeta: Calm down damn it.

Me: (hits him behind his head) Hmm, I'm working on the naruto crossover, but Atemu isn't being nice to me.

Atemu: I will not let you put Mana in a love triangle.

Me: That's what makes a good story dummy!

Atemu: Get over it.

Me: SIT! (sees the pharaoh look confused and runs off the catch up with Mana) Come back here.

Vegeta: Since she's gone I'll tell you what she meant. She wants a sequel and is curious what you will come up with.

Lovely story, I'll be waiting for the sequal!