nice look at Weir

Delightful little story

This felt so amazingly real; I'm pretty sure my heart stopped when those life-signs blinked out. I also loved that it was from Radek's point of view, he was very well written.

cool chapters

The Rime of the Ancient Mariner is one of my favorite poems. I'm doing my term paper on it :D In fact, I just finished working on my thesis paragraph for it about an hour ago. Then I found this...weird, huh? Anyway, this was the most original take on the poem that I've seen since Garth Nix's Keys to the Kingdom series. Zelenka was very much like the Mariner, and Rodney...well, was perfectly Rodney. I like how you made the allusion to the albatross hanging around their necks--that was pretty clever. Overall, great job.

Luv,
Miss Pookamonga ;-P

This was very, very good. You write action very well, and I think it worked especially well here, where we came into the story in the midst of the crisis, and saw the entire thing only via Radek. That kept the tension up and hooked into the story.

Freaking awesome.
Oh yeah, more more more, please.
I'd love to see your take on the "and miles to go before I sleep" poem. *VBG*
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Interesting. Very strong though Elizabeth almost makes that same mistake most fictional (and possibly real) villains do - gloating!

And yes, the Prufock poem is in "Bee in a Bonnet" and is one of my favorite fics.

Yes, yes, that was Bee in the Bonnett where I managed to shoe horn in a bit of Prufrock. Thanks so much for the plug.

Got to tell you, this story really rocks! I mean, the imagery of this is incredible, so detailed and lovely. It's just a gorgeous bit of business that shows us exactly what Weir is all about, and what she is capable of. This is the Weir I want to see on the show. This is what she should be. Thank you for making that happen

Oh, I am definitely going to try this! Great story! I wonder if I can manage to keep it short? And I'm pretty sure you're right about 'Bee in The Bonnet' - I loved that story!

Nice! For working 'fast', I'd say you did great! I saw your challenge up on your site, and am thinking about giving it a crack myself...

Review thing kept 'throttling' me. How terrible of it.

Beautiful story. Radek is awesome. Rodney was great.

The description of Teyla, being more and more level as things hit the fan was a fantastic and accurate way to describe her reactions.

Still haven't read the Cloning and Expression of gene encoding for surface protein 5...can't get passed the title. Its so dry
it makes my eyes burn.

You are sabotaging my saturday of journal reviews. My great weakness for fanfic is being exploited...of course this is the only working computer in my life right now.

Why is this in a review? I don't know.

Seeya.

great great short stories. (if I hadn't mentioned it already)

You writing short fics? Unheard of!

Great stories, just found them. They are so much more interesting and action packed than reading about the cloning and expression different anaplasma species. Trust me.

Awesome stories.

Damn exciting! Love this story. I adore how you have it all from Radek's point of view. The real 'action' is happening offscreen, but the POV is so tense where it is, so electric! I love your portrayal of Radek. So often he's the clever guy who's quietly right, while Rodney blusters about. Nice to see that he can fail -- and still work his way out of that and save the day.

Do another one!

Wow! For something that you said you wrote very fast, it was very well done! Great sense of suspense and excitement. Well done!