Really great story, loved it. I liked that Ardeth wasn't completely helpless and beaten at the end, but also that he was willing to ask for Rick's help. I also liked that Jonathan wanted to turn over a new leaf and that Evie was glad he was willing to try, even though she knew he'd never go through with most of it!

Loved this comment of Rick's, 'And now someone was hurting Ardeth enough to make him cry out. Rick pulled his gun and hoped dearly that he would put it to good use before this night was over.'

I can SO see this.

I've read this story countless times, and it still takes my breath away. You are wonderful.

story is really good haven't finshed yet but i came up with an idea..you should write a story of when they just got back from Egypt, like u kind of explain in the story here...

Why am I always speachless at the end of your stories? I feel the need to say something profound and awe inspiring, the problem being, you've already done it. BRAVO!

Miss Becky, how did I miss this one? Jonathan is exact. Alex, for once, is written in a manner I can appreciate and even like the little blighter. Last, but not least, the story is a ripper. Big Smile.

"sniff" What an incredibly beautiful story...Kudos to Miss Becky for writing such a magnificent piece of human drama. Thank you for allowing your male characters to display a depth of emotion and brotherhood so rarely seen nowadays...all your characters seemed so real...so complex...so vulnerable... I read it three times in a row..."angst-fest" each time. Wow...such a brilliant and well-composed story...Thank you

Everything you write is just magic! I absolutely LOVED it!

I can't quite finds the right words just this moment, except that I thought this story was very, very good...

Wonderful! I loved it!

GREAT!

::thunderous applause:: Yahoo! Bravo! Bravo!

absolutely most excellent story! :)

I will have to search out your other works!

Oh what a great story! I loved it and felt like I was watching a great movie. The plot was excellent.

He cut Ardeth's face! That makes me mad... But hey, it was a good story, as always.