| Reviews for Heart Apparatus |
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Guest 4/9/13 . chapter 1 Cool, it wuld be great if you wrote more and made a series out of this! |
Sepsis 10/30/11 . chapter 1That was so adorable! :D |
Heh 7/9/11 . chapter 1 It's eleven o'clock at night and i'm watching family guy and i think to myself, "I should read a fanfiction about that one cute andriod from Trinity Blood and Esther" even though i havent seen the show in years. So i Did. It rocked! |
Skyrere 6/17/11 . chapter 1absolutely delightful. :D well done. I love it. this would make an excellent start as a longer fic. IF it ever tickles your fancy to do so. |
ScarletKira 1/15/11 . chapter 1I really like this story. I love strange couples. The last line was really great. |
DragonRider-Xankira 10/9/09 . chapter 1I love this. It's gorgeous. This is a really nice one-shot that doesn't take it overboard (and while overboard is nice, sometimes we need a bit of normality), short and sweet. Well done! |
InLuvWithMicky 9/7/09 . chapter 1Thiis is so cute. Migh tI be able to ask you for more (wiggles eyebrows)? |
wen 1/20/09 . chapter 1 so swet ] |
Nanasaki 1/3/09 . chapter 1So cute |
xAllThatGlittersx 10/25/08 . chapter 1aw! how sweet |
Nascense 9/22/08 . chapter 1Hee. What a strange couple you have here, Fallacy. I must wonder why you prefer couples so out of the norm. But this is really pretty. And shiny. I like it a lot, and though I tried to find something to critisize (oh, believe me, it's not to be mean... it's to try to help you as a writer!) I'm afraid I could not. All your stories are beautiful, of course, and this is no exception. Bai bai! |
Hesunohana 6/7/08 . chapter 1 so funny ! I loved your story ! |
Yuki Minamoto 4/25/08 . chapter 1That was so cute! I really love Tres and Esther together! The story makes it all the more exciting when Tres is an andriod. And LOL on Esther's "theory"! People need to make more of this! I was hoping that Esther and Tres kiss, but it adds more longing and it captures the audience. Great Story, I give it a 5/5! |
TVL 7/9/07 . chapter 1Oh wow! his is great. You really should write more to this! I would be an awesome story. ] |
Nicoteen 6/25/07 . chapter 1Omigosh. This is...so awesome. I love it. |