Great story!! ^^

~ CupidKirby

Well, it made me laugh, which is what I was looking for today.

To tell you the truth, I don't like self-insertion very much (and I absolutely despise Mary-Sues, though this isn't on that level... yet), but I ventured on anyway, and I came in surprisingly amused. I find it rather dissapointing, though, that this doesn't feel just like an inspiration from FOP episodes, it feels like a mix-and-match job of other episodes. Try and do something a tad more original for next chapter.

Awesome. Happy holidays great OC!

Such a nice story! Make more chapters please!

A toilet brush? Well, that explains a lot...

hey, whats up?
i like it, please continue soon.

Boy, Yumi likes rubbing Timmy's nose in it!