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| Vega Dreamer 2007-02-06 ch 1, | abuseThat was really good. Please write a sequal! that would be awesome! |
| grissomlove 2007-01-23 ch 1, | abuseHI, I have one question, Why do older men think thier not hot? And grissom should know better, after all, hasen't Sara let him know with and without words she loves only him? some times I'd like to kick him dead in the pants. Dont get me wrong, I love Grissom but he needs to let go of his fear and embrace the love that is in front of him. Please write sequel to this one, sorry this is so long |
| StarlaMarie 2006-12-29 ch 1, | abuseWonderful!! |
| NM42 2006-12-27 ch 1, | abuseAw...you have got to be kidding me! When I heard this song I was like, I must do a songfic ag=bout it, you beat me too it and you probably and most likely would have and did write it better then me =] I love it, and the song of course! Great job, well written! -NM |
| Lil' Ainjil 2006-12-27 ch 1, | abuseOh, that was marvelously written - great characterization of the big G, very believable analysis of his motives. (I also like the way you brought rationalization into the story. Nice touch. :) By all means, I'd love to see a sequel to this story. |