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AznEejit
2008-05-25
ch 29,
abuseCrap, I just realised I left a distasteful signed review as your last review on your finished story, which is something I would not wish on my most hated author unless well-deserved of said author, which is a category you and your fic don't fall into. Sorry! Umm... when I cool down I might read your story and leave a long positive review as your last...
AznEejit
2008-05-25
ch 30,
abuseI finally read your e-mail today, under an old e-mail account that I don't use and I must say I'm pretty peeved- not that you really care.

Well, you made a mistake in not reading my last SIGNED review because I actually apologised to you once I reread the chapter and paid more attention to detail, but since you oh-so pettily declined to read it and sent a rather patronising e-mail then I suppose I shall decline reading the rest of your fic which I so patiently waited for you to finish so I could perhaps appreciate it more.

I have enjoyed reading your fic.. in fact if you checked through pages of reviews you will see my name under Kim. I left a constructive review under constructive criticism because I felt like leaving a subject line under name so that it'd be more of a eye-catcher but I suppose it's length alone would have sufficed.

I understand that authors have a life; thus, for some to be leaving lengthy chapters is seldom. I did appreciate your endurance to finish your story, but I had hoped for longer chapters that would be more memorable and not so choppy cliffhangers that made me scream in agony, hence the distasteful review.

I would never ask about a strangers' personal issues because I don't think it's my business either and I'm not a therapist and I shall take your suggestion "Or you can just stop reading it if a lack of a thousand words bothers you oh so much." - except I'm not going to stop reading it solely on the fact that it's chapters are short, but rather the parochial author.

I have understood since then that you had exams to worry about and uni, since I'm very much going through the same and I realised my faulty criticism, but the fact that you will only block out somewhat negative reviews kinda bugs me. Actually... deleting them bugs me... If you don't like them, fine! Leave it there until it disappears under the stacks of short and mostly repetitive goodies. If it was a flame, I understand you deleting them, but mine wasn't so to have my long @$$ review deleted with the flamies is irritating.

Ok, so criticisms may put you down a bit, but I believe should also drive you which mine did since you made chapter 28 longer and I thank you for that. Sadly I'm too peeved to read that chapter and beyond. I may be making a big fuss over nothing, but it's my big fuss to make because those reviews took a hella lot from my fingers to type- not that you would care, but I do!

-Kim (I actually made some positive yet repetitive reviews under this name a while back, so not everything I wrote was negative in some way. I guess I wanted to maybe break the chain of goodies with something more meaningful.)
rhiann
2008-05-07
ch 30, anon.
abuseWell done it was great!! I am going to read it over and over it was really sweet. Keep up the gd work I wud like to read more of ur work! Ty
SoraKaizoku
2008-05-03
ch 30,
abuseI'm so glad they finally said they loved each other! ^_^ That was a good story, i kept checking my e-mail, eagerly awaiting the next chapter. I'm almost sad it's over...
Emela
2008-05-03
ch 30,
abuseAwwh that ending was beautiful! So cute, but of course so sad too. Poor Ruby.. I've enjoyed reading this every step of the way, I can't wait for more fics (that I'm fervently hoping will come! ;) )
evita
2008-05-03
ch 30, anon.
abuseI truly enjoyed every chapter of this fic, I am so glas you completed it. The ending was good but I wish Ruby had survived. .
Looking forward to your next fic.
VampMistress
2008-05-03
ch 30,
abusewow, truly a remarkable story. And you told it wonderfully. thank you. and i hope to read more from you in the future. ~VM~
I-Confuse-Everyone
2008-05-03
ch 30,
abuseYay! What an awesome story. Brilliant :D
montypython203
2008-05-03
ch 30,
abuseThis was an absolutely brilliant read. Well done :)
I'mTheMasterOfWhatever
2008-05-03
ch 30,
abuseAmazing ending!
forestwife
2008-05-03
ch 30,
abusenice one. brilliant ending!
Xx GeOrGiI xX
2008-05-03
ch 30,
abuseI've loved this story. Sorry I haven't left any reviews before this but I just had to at the end. It was really well written, the story was great and the spelling and grammar were perfect. I really enjoyed it. Thank you. xx
bluedragon1836
2008-04-17
ch 29,
abusei'm hooked. completely. I love this story.
blackhairdye
2008-04-16
ch 29,
abuseGreat chapter! Good detail with the whole current created by the boat sucking them down, do you know if that really happens when a boat sinks? Anyway loving the little fluff at the end there. Looking forward to the next chapter and finding out what happens next.
xheartxcorex
2008-04-16
ch 29,
abuseawwh. *cries*.. that was heartbreaking.
Ruby :(
this was a fantastic chapter and written so well

update soon
xx
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