Cute :P

I love that Josh Groban song! And the story was just as great! They went together perfectly! Good Work!

Oh my god that was brilliant... I think I'm actually trembling... That was a fantastic story!
Keep up the terrific work,
Tricki : )

PS: Great song, too. Just perfect for the story!

Aw! Awesome story, i love Matt and Emily together! It's really well written too, hope you write more Standoff fics soon there arent enough of em! lol

-Corinna

Aw! I liked the message of the story. Even though I couldn't see Matt and Cheryl sleeping together or him not telling Emily, it was a very good chapter. Definitely post more stories please!

Aw, It was so good. I especially loved Matt's line 'if it were easy, it would hardly be worth having'. I really loved this story.

cool piece.
little perturbed about that add in with him actually sleeping with the boss. That kinda sucks. Totally understand Em.
Do more!

Colly E. of twin*muse

hey that was great, and it wasn't corny, it went well with the song (although you have some mistakes in the lyrics - eggshells not ancients, what "ifs" not it's). Keep up the good work :-)

Im glad they stayed together! Good story, you should write another.

This story was wonderfully written. Keep up the great work!

I LOVED IT. I hope you continue to write Standoff fics...forever :)

This was simply beautiful...
I...really don't know what to say.
oh yeah. AW!
I'm faving this for sure!