Please UPDATE! I know it's on Hiatus but PLZ!

I want to know wat happens between emberheart and Streakfoot!

UPDATE I've being waiting long enough!

Nice! I enjoy this story I hope you update soon! Please make redfur and streekfoot break up. Redfur is EVEL! I enjoy your writing style though.

eh..you promised you would make redfur and streaky break up T_T great...i feel so googly inside...i dont even know why im writing this review lol oh yea im bored...nice job on making streaky bleed...:D o_o eh haha ur no longer deputy oh well lol secretly attack frostar and become leader or watevs :D

Wow. I was nearly in tears at the end of chapter 18. You are an amazing writer! Please continue the story! I love your style of writing.I'm gonna keep watch on this story, and any others you have written. Keep up the great work! I wait with bated breath for the next chapter.

WHOAH IT TOOK YOU LIKE A YEAR TO WRITE THIS sUPER SHORT CHAPTER


AH
i dnno how long ive been waiting for this.
but i like the ending
and like mr reeve says - "YOU ARE A VERY TALENTED WRITER!"

HAHA
"ouch, man."

T_T NO u STILL DIDNT UPDATE : ( i dont want to be stuck to streakfoot : ( he sucks balls

thank you so much for *cough* adding *cough* REDFUR *cough* with um some hated boy that i hate *cough* a hehehehe soo very funny so VERY FUNNY

It was so good. Please keep on writing. I want to hear what happens to Emberheart.

*sniffle* WAHH! Poor Dawnpaw!! why does she have to go through all this?? she's only an apprentice?? spova4evr...DONT GO CRAZY!! lovely story. BEAUTIFLY WRITTEN...

*eyes widen* what if Streaky really is Spottedtail's halfbrother?? I bet Emby would be mad at me..lolz

YAHAHAHAH! Dawnpaw can be such a flirt sometimes...lolz CUTE. heheh...

ahh... too many cats like streakfoot! He might even be a player in disguise... LOL

It was so good.. Please keep on writing

Beautiful.

that story is okay but it is kinda sad that all her real family died.please wright the next chapter soon