Aww, so sweet! Talia and Gilbert make such a perfect couple! I've read your two fics of them, and I loved both! I hope I see more of them. Thank's for sharing : )

I loved it! How often I wished that they didn't break up;they could be like Mwu and Murrue. Are you writing a sequal to this?

AGH! Oh my! I totally overlooked that! x_x Thanks ritachi for pointing that out! Please pardon that mistake. It was mentioned around three times in the story. Hence, "Commander" is replaced by "Captain" (as we all know ;p) Thank you for you warm review. It's reviews like these that inspire me to write more. Write one too! ;p Let's expand the fandom! :)

much love,
blinkie

Well, reading your stories on Talia and Gilbert, I must say that I'm kind of swaying towards them. It's nice to read romantic stories with adults as the main characters rather than teenagers or just young adults because the love portrayed in those stories always seem so fleeting to me. But yours doesn't. It feels very...real in an odd sense.

However, I would like to point out some corrections. One is that Talia was actually made Captain of the Minerva, not Commander. It was Athrun who became Commander. As well, there are those small little mistakes around the story, but of course, they don't take out too much attention from the one-shot. Just brush your eyes over it again and check it. I'm sure you'll find them.

Anyway, great story once again. I kind of feel inspired to write a story about them. So who knows?

P.S. Thanks for dedicating the story to me. I am ritachi if you don't know.