Lol, very cute. Oh Jayne...

This was very fluffy and I seriousy loved it. (cuddles the screen like a weirdo) (grins) So adorable!

Person Of A Strange Origin

He put SIX slices of balogna on the sandwich? Holy crap! I can stand one or two, but SIX? Cute story.

aw

very nice!

Aw! So cute!

This is very cute. Jayne being all nervous and self-conscious seems completely out of character, but it's cute to imagine anyway. And River's reaction to the sandwich was very good. Very analytical, which is her spot-on. I liked it. O:)

Cute . . . they sure do make a weird couple, though, don't they?

-Ukky

I really liked your characterizations. It's neat how you take a simple thing like a sandwhich and examine what it can mean to these characters. Jayne and River are my two favorite characters, and i loved reading this little episode. Nice!