It was good!
Maybe a bit longer, next time, since you're definitely good at this kind of thing...

This is good! It shows some true lovin'! :P

One thing I would say is that, don't use the word '**', it sounds like something you would use as...well...something that didn't involve any type of sex (please don't take this as a horrible thing...)

Good though! I can't do lemons to save my life...(unless I did hours of thought..but yea...I aint good at that)

And plus...If my friends saw...they would freak :P

Nice, but more detail needed.

Nice Fic, I'm working on a similar one myself. Sex was a bit too short ;)

*scratches head* WTF? That was so fast I'm surprised that they didn't pull something...

Ew..that was freaky,man. Write stories that and have revelancy and decency. Not very good, sorry.

*shakes head and sighs* I'm sorry. This could have been a good fic, but its way too damn short! Lengthen it. Unless you're a virgin, you know sex takes a lot longer than half a page of writing. I'm working on a steamier section for my own fan-fic, and it's already taken me a week. MORE STORY!

Horrible. Absolutely horrible.
For one, Midna isn't an imp. She was cursed.
Second, the plot is way too short and doesn't even hyave a good starting point.
Third, you fail at writing fanfiction.

I thought the story was very good except it could have been longer and a little more in-detail of Midna's house. The part of the story that I did not understand was that in the story Link showed up to Midna's house as a wolf, but nowhere did it mentioned when he changed his form to a human from a wolf. I'd give this story a 4 out of 5.

That was bad. The plot was bad, the description was bad, the lemon was bad, and when you combine all thos features, it results in a terrible story. I love MidnaxLink, but you really didn't give me that. I mean, you could replace the name Link with Bob and Midna with Joanna and nobody could tell that it was ever a MidnaxLink fic. I'm sorry, but you fail.

Cute! That was so cute. There really aren't enough lemons with Link and Midna, that's sad. Thanks a bunch!

*gives you Midna plushie*

THAT WAS WAY TO FAST slow down and try again i say rewrite it and make ALOT longer make it well hotter. any who for a short story its ok but let me stress and not to be mean IT NEEDS TO BE LONGER ;)

>_< That was terribly dissapointing
It was very rushed and no detail or atmoshphere
basicaly ** without plot, and bad ** at that.
It is also obvious you havn't yet beaten the game.
I was expecting more for the first Midna/Link fic but don't worry
I shall make the second one, and it will hopefully make up for this disaster
^_^

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