This was a really good idea, but i dont like how you portray Wes...

I liked the idea of the fan fiction, and I liked how you wrote it, but I kind of don't like how you... portrayed Wes. Although good story! I'm not saying I didn't enjoy it, because I did. Anyways, keep up the good work and good luck with your fan fictions. :]

aww that was really cute i liked it

I really liked this.

Hmm, you could improve on editing the actual text but this is still very cute. I'm gonna read "SaWoon" as well! I'm excited!

Hey! I would say that you should write more, but that you need to work on your grammar. You have quite a few run on sentances and some comma errors. I'd be happy to beta for you, if you wanted. I already beta for two other authors (Harry Potter).

You have a good sense of what should happen in the plot, but the grammar detracts from the understanding and enjoyment of your stories. I have read both of your Sarah Dessen stories, and I liked them both. Keep writing, and you'll improve!

Thanks for writing, and just tell me if you would like me to beta for you. I think you have lots of potential! Keep it up.

YES, write more. It was pretty good, but 1 word for you: PUNCTUATION! other than that, I really enjoyed it. Just edit next time, OK? ;)

sync not sink
wrapped not rapped
write not wright

This was okay, I would of liked it to be longer and have a little more thought process go on.

Yeah, basically my only criticism is the grammar, lots of run- ons and spelling errors. Other then that, its really good! I would love to see what you write next!

This is great! I would love to read more!

I finished reading this book today. I got hooked and read it in two days , fastest time i ever read a book . I loved it !
I'm so in love with Wes ! :)
Great chapter, its cool to know what Wes was thinking about
update soon :D

AW...it makes me feel bad for wes, i love that book...you did it perfectly, it was as if sarah dessen wrote it herself!

That was really good. I really enjoyed it.

Write more!

wow that was a really good story you told it from his point of view nicely the only suggestion i have would be your grammar but thats just a small suggestion which really you don't even have to listen to lol...and i definately think you should write more of the story in his point of view bravo!