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| Ice Dragon3 2007-09-29 ch 1,  | abuseI like this. I like the part with Matt in it--in the manga he's there a lot, helping Mello, but the reader never really gets to see inside his head. I thought you did a great job with his personality. |
| EmptyWord 2007-06-11 ch 1, | abuseThis is heartrendingly beautiful. So very, very sweet and moving and -sad-. I should probably read past L's death in the manga before I start in on Near/Mello/Matt fanfiction, but all the same, the gem of this piece was the emotion, the humanity, and that is something anyone can be touched by. Very nice. |
| Aya-may 2007-05-16 ch 1, | abuseOi! I likey this story very much. I never got to the point in the Manga where I was introduced to Matt, so I don't know how he acts. But as for Near. I think you did a good job on it. And you're right. Near and L do act alot alike. So, that makes sence that they share feelings for one another. |
| Moohgough 2007-04-03 ch 1, | abuseWow! I really enjoyed reading this, you need to write more, seriously. *nodnod* Aww. Near and L. Rather cute. XDXD Need more near and L in this world. |
| JediMasterWithAPen 2007-03-25 ch 1, | abusei like it, you explain near vary well. |
| Decorinne 2007-03-05 ch 1, | abuseWow. Just wow. I like the innocnece of Near's actions (trailing snowflakes, playing with his hair) in contrast to those of Matt and his cigarettes and rebellion. I love how you explained the N & L relationship with all its simple complexities. Such is love. |
| Ai-Kusabana 2007-03-01 ch 1, | abuseAw... Poor Near! THis is soo cute! Hope you'll make another one! ^_^ |
| TaoSan 2007-01-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow, looks like you can do characterization of everyone...:D That was very pretty and cute, quite melancholic as well. I like Near, still dunno why do many people hate him so much, he's such a sweet lil baby :3 Good theory about him being so emotionless. Mine is that he has Asperger Syndrome just like L! XD. Must...read...more...Nirah-san's...fics...UPDATE SOON San^_^ |
| Ashen Phoenix 2007-01-08 ch 1, | abuseI'm really glad you started writing Death Note fanfics, along with your Shaman King ones. Your writing style is very fluid and easy to grasp, and I love how closely you keep the characters' personalities in-tact. I feel like, after reading this, I've come to care a little more about Near's character, and understanding a bit more about him (even though this is a fanfiction). The ending was wonderful; I'm happy cuzz I was able to guess correctly when the ending was almost nigh. It's a nice, random, DN fic. ^_^ |
| tkari 2006-12-30 ch 1, | abuseAww this is such a cute fic X3 I havent met most of the characters yet as i stopped when L died XD But still its really kawaii bless them, interesting thoery about the emotion thing ^^ See Tammy >> Lookie, lookie! Im... REVIEWING!! *thunder crashes in the background* ...the guy in a film i just baught has the same last name as noah... XD Scary >> Anyway cool fic and UPDATE AFL! ...wow i was SO gonna put UL there XD I wanna read that fic again now, and the triology with gustav in it XD Damn you and your god damn kick-ass fics! DAMN YOOU! |
| MlleD 2006-12-28 ch 1, | abuseAw... Just... aw. I always loved the LMN family. This is such a sweet fic. I love your rendition of L and Near's relationship. |
| Shin-Ora 2006-12-28 ch 1, | abuseI enjoyed that. It was so simple that it actually brought a tear to my eye. Keep up the awesome writing! |