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Reviews for: TWINS: Twins at the Door, Sunday
Sarai
2007-12-30 . chapter 1
Sweet!
Cassandra30
2007-01-18 . chapter 1
Wow! Very nice service. Much like I am used to as well. An excellent explanation of God's Love. Very well done.
Slea
2007-01-10 . chapter 2
a wonderful story. thanks, I love the sentinal/M7 combo. and as always i love your stories ... but just a reminder... you have two unfinished stories that still have me at the edge of my seat. Don't rush them they are too good to be rushed just hoping for the next chapters. Thank you so much for sharing your talent.

Cyndi
Duchess67
2007-01-08 . chapter 2
I absolutely ADORED this chapter! The idiot bad guys getting all banged up, *still snickering at "Goliath" and the slingshot* the reactions of the cops at learning the little ones were responsible and Beau Guiding Dev in how to control his sensory spikes. Poor little thing! He's gonna be hungry again later. I wanna hug him!

Poor VIN! What he must be going through while his boys are out of his sight like this and the possibility of some meanie telling him the twins had been kidnapped! Gr

Heads are gonna roll, right? *hopeful look*
Duchess67
2007-01-08 . chapter 1
My hat is off to you for sneaking an excellent little sermon into a fantastically fun story universe. *two thumbs up* :):):)
steamfan
2006-12-31 . chapter 2
If Vin isn't a Sentinel he is certainly a carrier! hahaha I should have known that Bill was one of the bad guys. Only a real creep could treat the twins that bad. Great job. The bonding chapter of Guardians is up now and yes I did use some of your stuff and credited you. Please check it out and see if I did it right. If not, I'll go back and correct. I don't want to get it wrong.
katfairy
2006-12-28 . chapter 2
I generally enjoy your stories, but found the religion in this chapter to be a bit heavy-handed. Also, my experience of three-year-olds is that there is NO WAY that one could sing an entire song that clearly, especially if he lisps so badly when speaking.

It's not that I object to religion in stories, when it's plausible, but it's a subject that needs a gentle hand or it comes off as preachy.
shannbooks
2006-12-28 . chapter 2
I was so happy to see the next day in this series. Plese update this series as soon as possible. I can't wait to see what happens next. I am so glad that they have Jim & Blair to help well Tad & Uncles are away. Keep up the excellent work.
Thank you for posting for us to enjoy.
Vinsmouse
2006-12-27 . chapter 2
Good story, them two are gonna be hell on wheels when they're grown. Looking forward to more stories in this series. Take care,
Mouse
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