this was great. i am rather fond of sheppard-pounding. gotta say, though, rodney should have had an inhaler or something. 'course, epinephrine stops asthma attacks too ^^;

That was a great story. Had me captivated the entire time. I really like the whole Atlantis reaching-out-for-help theory. That was pretty cool. You did a really good job on the Rodney/John friendship and wrote them really well. You had me laughing a few times!! keep up the awsome writting!!

This was pure genious and perfect! I absolutely loved it!! It was very original and such a cool idea!! The whump was awesome and I loved the interaction between Rodney and John. And the thoughts of them both! I really liked how you made them afraid of the same thing. And Rodney's fake anaphylaxis attack. Awesome story!! Very well written!!

Delightful story. Makes me think of a line in the NCIS ep I just watched, where Tony asks Gibbs not to make him kiss him :P I'm also happy you at least at the medical right enough to not having Rodney perform CPR on someone with a pulse. Not sure why that bothers me so much, I can ignore other medical stuff and don't have any experience in that field (other than CPR class) but it really bothers me when writers get that wrong, so an atta-boy for you. I kinda like the idea of Atlantis 'talking' to Sheppard, which is something I've only seen in stories I've read recently, but I've been enjoying it.

Awesome idea!

Hey, this is awesome! I don't know how I missed it when you first posted. "The Pegasus Galaxy Forest Fire Flu" was hilarious, and so was Carson's reactions to John and Rodney.

This is perfect on so many levels. You totally nailed that prompt!

Very cool. I always enjoy your action stories. I like the part at the beginning, where they're listing their least favorite ways to die. Sateda strikes me as a "thorough" sort of place, myself.

Very original and very cool. The last bit with Carson had me laughing pretty hard. Is it just me or do Rodney's I"m dying routines remind anyone else of Sanford and Son? Probably just me... Laters.

AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME!

I absolutely adored how John's ATA, being his is the strongest of all the members ensconsed on Atlantis, connects him so deeply to the city that it calls to him. Really cool!

Your Sheppard and McKay friendship is supurbe.. I don't do slash, but I love the buddy-fics between these two. When Rodney stared crying.. I was nearly in tears too. And you have a great grasp on the characters voices; every one of them.

Lovely story!

Gorgeous!! ^^ (One of these days I'll write "Rotten!!" just for a change of pace...! =P ) A very original idea, and done with great style and wit. LOVED the oxygen mask business, and the rescue-breathing horrors! *giggle* Not to mention the very deft way you started the whole story off, with the prior conversation and the nightmare and Shep's very vivid symptoms...! I'm all aglow in the aftermath... ^^

(Er, sorry--on some sort of a post-work high/jag. I shall resume my usual brevity soon, I'm sure! =P )

Even when suffocating, McKay can't shut the hell up, heh!

I really enjoyed reading this story! Thank you for writing it and putting it up.

What a fantastic read, and I loved the fact that your story dealt with Sheppard's ATA gene. And the whump was fantastic. Great characterization and a wonderful story.

Thanks :D

hahaha! that was great and really enjoyable! Good job on the original idea, its gotta be hard to come up with something completely new thats still awesome! Fantastic job!