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LinziDay
2007-10-17
ch 1,
abuseAwesome idea!
Dr. Dredd
2007-10-11
ch 1,
abuseHey, this is awesome! I don't know how I missed it when you first posted. "The Pegasus Galaxy Forest Fire Flu" was hilarious, and so was Carson's reactions to John and Rodney.
Yllek
2007-08-29
ch 1,
abuseThis is perfect on so many levels. You totally nailed that prompt!
An Kayoh
2007-08-27
ch 1,
abuseVery cool. I always enjoy your action stories. I like the part at the beginning, where they're listing their least favorite ways to die. Sateda strikes me as a "thorough" sort of place, myself.
AlmostHeaven
2007-07-14
ch 1,
abuseVery original and very cool. The last bit with Carson had me laughing pretty hard. Is it just me or do Rodney's I"m dying routines remind anyone else of Sanford and Son? Probably just me... Laters.
JackFan2
2007-06-28
ch 1,
abuseAWESOME AWESOME AWESOME!

I absolutely adored how John's ATA, being his is the strongest of all the members ensconsed on Atlantis, connects him so deeply to the city that it calls to him. Really cool!

Your Sheppard and McKay friendship is supurbe.. I don't do slash, but I love the buddy-fics between these two. When Rodney stared crying.. I was nearly in tears too. And you have a great grasp on the characters voices; every one of them.

Lovely story!
Trishkafibble
2007-06-18
ch 1,
abuseGorgeous!! ^^ (One of these days I'll write "Rotten!!" just for a change of pace...! =P ) A very original idea, and done with great style and wit. LOVED the oxygen mask business, and the rescue-breathing horrors! *giggle* Not to mention the very deft way you started the whole story off, with the prior conversation and the nightmare and Shep's very vivid symptoms...! I'm all aglow in the aftermath... ^^

(Er, sorry--on some sort of a post-work high/jag. I shall resume my usual brevity soon, I'm sure! =P )
Lilith Lunatic
2007-06-07
ch 1,
abuseEven when suffocating, McKay can't shut the hell up, heh!
LastScorpion
2007-04-28
ch 1, anon.
abuseI really enjoyed reading this story! Thank you for writing it and putting it up.
Scully2
2007-04-04
ch 1,
abuseWhat a fantastic read, and I loved the fact that your story dealt with Sheppard's ATA gene. And the whump was fantastic. Great characterization and a wonderful story.

Thanks :D
puddles1311
2007-02-05
ch 1,
abusehahaha! that was great and really enjoyable! Good job on the original idea, its gotta be hard to come up with something completely new thats still awesome! Fantastic job!
TCB 0.5
2007-01-29
ch 1,
abuseI cannot even begin to tell you how much this story impressed and thrilled me.
I almost twirled off my (already very short) hair.
Extremely vivid and brilliantly written fanfic. You are surpassing yourself with this one, Sholio. *bows in awe*
MKofGod
2007-01-28
ch 1,
abuseLol, this is halarious, especially about the CPR. Great story.
gabumon
2007-01-26
ch 1, anon.
abuseI liked this story. the ATA gene that comes back to bite you in the ** stories are always good
Snarkydame
2007-01-22
ch 1,
abuseThis might be my favorite story of yours so far. Great job.
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