that was nice it really was good writing

Poetic is probably the only word that describes this. There is a profound shortage of Lillymon fics on this site and only a few Palmon and NO Togemon. (Ho hum...I admit it, I bought a cuddly toy Palmon at a jumble sale today!) :) I've read this story a hundred times and it's wonderful! (I'm not always as longwinded, by the way)

O.o Wow, Ryder would explode if he read this. *is jealous of your vocabulary*

That was beautiful!

Oh wow... i don't think i've read something that good for ages. your discription is beautiful, the song lyrics are gorgeous, and the whole thing captures something kind of indescribable. write more, or i'll find out where you live and set a rabid tokomon on you. _

That was almost like poetry, and that little bit in italics was just beautiful! Keep it up!

*adds to faves* *in state of shock from your ability to write so well*

Yay! A Lilymon story! I really liked it. Sure it was fluffy, but everyone writes fluff (especially me). I thought this story was very sweet. I have never read a story in Lilymon's POV before, and I thought this was very well done. You are on a Mimi kick? I hope you write more about her and Lilymon in the future. After Jyou and Ken, Mimi is my favorite!