Hey, like the other one, i just found this, and yep gotta say enjoyed this just as much as the other one, but i have to ask are you planing on doin any more SG1 storys?... oh and in chapter 6 (i think), you erm put 'Tok'ra attack' did you mean that? or did you mean to write 'Goa'uld attack'?...

anyway great story, thanks!.

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This was an absolutely fantastically brilliant fic! The tension, suspense and emotion were incredible, as was the storyline. I just wish you'd written more SGC fics as the two I've just read were both amazing stories. :o)

Oh, I just loved this. Very good! You hit all the right emotional buttons.

If we could only rewrite history to no ill effect.

Very, very clever. I loved it. 100 Days is the one ep I reall y hate and I love how you 'fixed' it for me! Thanks.

Judi

Wow! That was a brilliant story. Your characterisation was spot on and very well-written, with an interesting concept behind the story. Very well done.

hey, great story! this is really good, you sould write more stargate stuff.

One picky little detail, you say " The scar from the cut he had received during the Tok'ra attack on the SGC was gone. in Chp. 6.

Thats the only thing i noticed, other then that it was perfect.

perfect

Hey there,
Just a note 4 u.
This story is really awsome. I was looking thro. the olders fics on this list and thought it sounded interesting, and i bam! i read this incredible story! It was very well paced and not rushed at all. normaly when I read a good story i rush thro it and miss all of the little details, but i didn't feel that I had to with this. great job.
Also it loved the ocational bits of humor. It wasn't all straight up angst. thats good. Another thing I really liked how you left it open in the end for imagination, (sequel, perhaps?). someone said 'not in a nice neat bow'. I liked that.
1 more thing (then ill let u get on w/ ur life. Honest i will!). Thank you for changing the way 100 days plays out! THANK YOU SO much!.
Ok, im done now. Awesome job.
*reader*

Well paced and powerful story . . . you captured his desperation and pain perfectly. I like that you resisted the temptation to tie everything up in a neat package, instead leaving things open for the unknown future. Excellent!

Wow...

I actually cried! Well written and the character interplay is perfect. And I love that you changed 100 days! This version is soooo much better.

Glad to see Jack was a 'Laira free zone' second time around. Great stuff. Write more Stargate stories!

i love the whole argument with yourself thing!

that was good! Well written and a nice read during my free lesson! Ah well, back to coursework I suppose! Keep writing!

my gosh! i have read this story so many times, and i still love it. The detail and imagery is so good that its unbelievable. Each sentence has so much feeling. This story deserves some kind of reward or something cause it is so amazing. please write more stories!