Aww, I remember reading this! There should be more Touya-Kaho fanfics, right?

One of my favorite fanfics of all time! Short, nice and uniquley(sp?) sweet! Can you make more fics of this pairing? That would be really nice! Thanks!

I like the Touya-Kaho pairing but never seem to find much in this site...I noticed though you had the effort done with two fics focusing solely on them...so may I make a tiny request...if it's not any trouble to you...could you make a fic on the Touya-Kaho pairing for me? Not that it's a necessity, I just want to read more about their pairing. Please do make it long...not that short...also, a complete fic if possible (one-shot, two-shot) and...like what you did before...romantic in a unique way. It would really make my day. Thanks in advance.

"Secret and Spices" is an apt phrase to apply to Kaho.

Your strongest sentence in the fic was this one: "He would be tempted sometimes to ask her questions like ‘what are you thinking?’ when she’d gaze into the distance and she would let out this clear, lovely laugh and she would tell him it was nothing." That one in particular hits Kaho's behavior straight on, and implies the natuer of their relationship as a helpful side effect.

I notice that you shift from a Touya-voice narrative to a dialogue form of story-telling; staying with the monologue might have been better. I felt that Touya's observation of Kaho and their experiences together was a stronger medium for conveying the uniqueness and profoundness of their relation. Cooking and hot chocolate, while comforting, may have the watering-down effect of generifying these two.

I hope you'll keep at this pair, and continue to explore them.