Beautiful.

aww, cute ((but you spelled doctor wrong)) sorry, i'm a grammar/spelling nazi lol but it still rawked.

Aww...That brought tears to my eyes. I LOVED it! Haha. I really, really loved it.

*sniffle* thats so touching_

that poem was so cute. I loved it, I think that this needs to be published

Hey, thats so cool.! But i'm going to be honest with you Good job on the fanfic, i'll grade it a C but the poem was awsome, and i wish i had permission and a girlfriends to read it to. I give it an A.

Good job!

ey, tell your friend the poem was great!

I realy love the poem, the story is good to, but the poem is the best. Very sweet.

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. That is sooooooooooo Kawaii! I've read that 3 times and now finaly reviewed it ;;;

Ami

Kawaii! *has a certain best friend/angel who needs to read that poem..*

Your friend wrote that poem! That is so good.

oi! ::sniff:: its sweet... ::sniff:: im crying... ::sniff:: not bcuz it gav me cavities... ::sniff:: cuz it didnt... ::sniff:: its so cute! ::sniff:: i like it! ::sniff:: mayb even LOVED it! ::sniff:: (i often read yuri stuff, my friend writes mako/ami stories) i really like ur stories...::sniff:: keep writing

great poem. happy story!

Pretty romantic too! :)