Oh man, I cried so much lol

Great story! Loved it! Have been a big Ashe/Balthier Fan for so many years now. Glad I got back into reading these stories.

Amazing story. You're writing was absolutely wonderful. I read this in a single sitting and loved the entire story.

I read this wonderful story again and again...and addicting (I bought a box of kleenex for emergency)! And it's better than one shot! And I fell in love the chemistry between Ashe and Balthier as I felt my tension keeps kicking me to overdrive!

So Ashe is the mother of two heirs (I mean fraternal twins) and I can wait what will happen when they're grow up! Are you planning for a sequel about the twins as teens - one who wants escape adventure to become as a sky pirate (could be a girl), the other is to save Dalmasca from domination and war (could be her brother)? Or which is one to save their kingdom and their mother's happiness...sorry I don't want to add more spoilers like this..he-he-he!

So high five for romantic fanfic and keep working! And also...HAPPY NEW YEAR!

The ring...:'D

Sorry I only reviewed in this chapter XD;

Hello. Me again. Slowly reading all of your work, lol

I just finished reading it and wanted to review. I loved it! It flowed so nicely and it had a bit of everything- action, plot, romance. It was so nicely done. Great Job!

Aw, what a great story! I loved it, once again the story was awesome! Thank you for such a great read! I'll be sure to read your other stories.

Ahh this is so good.

Just started and I'm already addicted.

Everyone is so in character, and I applaud that 100%, because that makes it all the more believable, and I want to be able to believe in the fics I read.

Brilliant!

Sequal?

I'm begging, you know that, right? The way you ended this...you left it open for a sequal...

The public's begging for it and so am I! Please! :-)

I just started reading this story and I am alreadu hooked! I love the game, love FF fanfic, and this is by far already one of my favorites. :-)

I've only read one or two fanfics but if they are all as descriptive and believable as this then bring it on

It's the BEST, honestly,the best fanfiction ever!I love this pairing and i cannot imagine a better way for this story to end.

Please keep up writing about those two!

Wonderfully bittersweet. I really enjoyed this story. Great flow throughout the whole thing, and the ending really captures that sad reality that they never really could end up together.

The end of this seriously made me cry. Not from the story itself, oh no. But from the fact that it was over. I praise the open ending as well. It leaves a little to the reader's own imagination.

omg! You are such a good writer! The ending made on the verge of tears!