Poor Makoto. So did she break up with Minako or did Minako break up with her?

Very sweet. I like the way you worked the song ito it.

I know it seems like your story is done, but can you please add another chapter. Is Minako married? Never married? Divorced? A deadbeat boyfriend? Will her and Makoto ever pick back up on their relationship? I have so many twist in my mind, but I want to know what the original artist thinks.

Ja ne!

So sad, but still so good, what happened though? between them? you can write a nother story about that! please
When you do, or if you do could you please e-mail me when you are done? with a link would be altra awsome but just your pen name and title would be awsome too. Please?
You really should.

ahhhhh thats not fair. great story!

That was great. :)