I like how you reversed the effect (Ryoko being drawn in the alternate universe, and Haruna being drawn in reality), it allows for a different point of view. I wish this could have been an actual scene in the movie...haha an epilogue or something. Good work here, fluent and everyone's in character.

Reading TM fics that spark from the third movie tend to be my favorite storylines, and this story was great! A very cute, believable moment between the two. :)

DO ANOTHER CHAPTER! DO IT! DO IT! ahem... it was really good! i think the ending could be touched up just the slightest bit, maybe instead of saying "and she knew" you could say something else. anyways, i really loved it! ANOTHER CHAPTER, OR DIE!

I actually just watched the movie on dvd and I was looking for a spin off with the two of them. This fit perfectly, thanks.

Oh, I love Tenchi and Ryoko! And this short story was a fitting tribute to my favorite couple.

I love the third movie because it is the closest to Tenchi being in love with Ryoko which is how it should be. Good story, keep it up!

Wow a great story! Tenchi Forever was the best!

Hey it's great. I liked the movie too. It was really the only alternate version of Tenchi Muyo I enjoyed.

I always thought Tenchi belonged with Ryoko. :)

TWO WORDS: LOVED IT!

-Thank you for writing this.

That was really cute! You did a wonderful job on it! Very well written

WOW! I really liked it! You should keep going with this...

Sessymaru

That was a really nice one shot. It's nice to see that other fans of Ryoko/Tenchi notice all the little things in the 3rd movie. After reading this, i'll have to check out your other stories. :)

Very sweet. I really liked that movie and did find that portrait rather significant. :) I would like to read more exploring the time Tenchi can't remember.

It was cute, i liked it!

aw that is so cute, it really sends ryoko fans to a happy place, very short and sweet