Another great story...more stories soon, please!

:-) New Year's Baby

This is so good i really loved it...very sad but good ..so them

Aww...this was so good, even if the ending was sad, but I love Ray-Neela angst. Nice job with the story. Loved the idea -

Aw, I loved it. Great story, Can't wait to read the next thing you write

Loved. But then you knew that. This was so perfect. Could totally picture it all. And you nailed Ray's thoughts dead-on. :D Great job. :)