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TheNameThatIWontTellYou
2008-09-21 . chapter 5
I'm really enjoying this, so much so that I forgot to review for the lasst two chapters, lol. But yeah, I'm loving this :D
SailorHecate
2008-09-21 . chapter 16
Hm, the addiction to memory continues to plague our dear Zabini and yet he can't stop himself. How delightful! One has to wonder if something beyond the time it takes to use that pensieve is draining him, and what exactly the Dark Lord has in mind for the young Slytherins. I, personally, would like to see a bit more of Chy in the present... though I'm obviously a bit biased as I am more or less speaking in third person there, LOL. In defense of my request, I think it may be a good idea to at least show a glimpse of exactly what her past being on display for teenagers is doing to her. Hope to see more soon!
TheNameThatIWontTellYou
2008-09-21 . chapter 2
I enjoyed this, especially the little twist at the end, except now I can't stop thiking of possible other reasons, lol.
TheNameThatIWontTellYou
2008-09-21 . chapter 1
I like, it's really well-written, and very enticing. :)
HogwartsHoney
2007-10-27 . chapter 15
Oohh! She is evil! But saying that I really liked this chapter, especially the memory. Good work.
HogwartsHoney
2007-07-18 . chapter 14
Zabini is thinking. And more are experiencing similar to him? I wonder what his task will be...
SailorHecate
2007-07-02 . chapter 14
Hm, our Zabini is starting to question things... that should bring some interesting results. Loved this chapter and hope you update soon!
SailorHecate
2007-06-28 . chapter 13
Amazing chappie! The mind games you've devised between the Slytherins are fabulous, as is the complete power the pensieve has over them. Hope to see more of my character soon!
HogwartsHoney
2007-06-28 . chapter 13
An ulteria motive? Hmm what could that be... Great chapter, the memories were interesting. The Dark Mark was the first of many given to her by Voldemort, so what are the others?
HogwartsHoney
2007-06-02 . chapter 12
The more I read the more I wonder, where is this going? Good work
Junsui
2007-06-01 . chapter 12
Other than minor typos, this is most skillfully written.
Zabini is an interesting choice, since in the books he seems mostly inclined to stay out of the Dark Lord's way.
It's definitely interesting to see the war written from the Dark side's point of view.
But I am getting impatient to know the purpose behind allowing this Zabini character to see all of these extremely personal memories.
Also, I'm curious: are any other characters from the site going to be making an appearance?
SailorHecate
2007-05-28 . chapter 12
Very interesting chapter! I find that, even knowing the where the memories are headed, I'm anxious to see more. Hope you update soon!
HogwartsHoney
2007-05-16 . chapter 11
Sorry this has taken me so long! Great chapter, this gets more and more intriguing. Ms Connors must have something going for her, all that and Voldemort is calm, well for him at any rate.
Celtic-Dragon-89
2007-05-15 . chapter 11
Please update soon! I like the story. at first i thought it was gonna be bout harry and the others ... but this is a very good story.
SailorHecate
2007-05-12 . chapter 11
Wonderful chappie! Again, the Zabini is fascinating to me... perhaps more and more as the story progresses. Hope to see more soon!
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