that was really good. especially the humour, makes me want to read some of your other writing.

BEFORE YOU HATE ME I AM NOT FLAMING YOU!

now that that's over with...
I kinda hated most of that b/c it was just to random (& not in the good way) and Oliver was such an idiot (and not in the adorable way) and they both were just a little bit OOC (my biggest pet-peeve EVER)
BUT...there were some lines that I just loved.
like:

“So what’s your number one now?”
He kisses me once more and pulls away with a cheeky smile.
“Make her fall in love with me.”

and

Without worrying about it, without knowing that below, all the party-goers had gathered outside just to watch the idiots that were on the broom in the middle of the firework display, without caring about what I might do and how I might react, he...kissed me.

and most importantly:

I’ve discovered something that you might find amusing. When you’re holding onto the waste of someone you really think that you could fall in love with at 11:47 exactly (I had my watch on, it is New Year’s after all), and you’re watching the moonlight as you’re climbing higher into the sky, you realize something.

It’s not the least bit cold up there.

:) Cheers!

PS - I think (in general) the rolled-up-sleeves thing is sexy...especially on Oliver Wood...

sappy cute.

awesome

*Cheers, applauds, catcalls, and such* Very well written, and SO cute! I loved the switch of POV... especially when Oliver was checking himeslf out in the window... lol. Great fic!
FM

I loved this story! It had me cracking up the entire time, you're pretty funny and I love the way you made the characters so full of life. I really enjoyed reading this story, it was sweet, short and funny. And the ending was perfect! =D

aw.
super cute.
loved it.

ack. i'm getting tired of writing long reviews. Dx

well. you're awesome. your stories are awesome. keep writing.

there we go. no more wasting time. must read more. >_

best romance story i've read in a while
i loved it

Aww that was so adorable and had a nice gob of humor. ^_^ Loved it!

Mazing!

OMG I LOVED IT SO MUCH
all of your rambling was hilarious
oliver chuckling!
belly jumper or whatever!
so funny
write more
oh and maybe a sequel too! like where oliver has already left and then comes back and surprises her...oh well your the author not me!!haha
anyways the ending was so cute!

AW! That was the cutest story ever! Very well-written!

Awee! Very, very cute! I loved it.

Aw!
as an un-17 year old man, i can bravely admit i was giggling. a lot. while my dad is asleep across the house. i was scared of waking him, so i ended up sounding like i was going through shock and couldn't breathe.
meh.
but so cute!
I LOVED IT!
**Duckies
PS too damn bad i went to sleep at 9 on new years