wow! nice!
i like it!!

Love this line : “One more word from you and you’re head’s going to meet a new friend, Mr. Lamp,” he growled threateningly.
I was laughing my head off. :3

SO KAWAII! ^^

^.^ Loved it! Can u write another chapter about what happened when they woke up? You don't have to...It just felt incomplete. Thanks a lot!!

was this story improved from the new year stuck pretending of natsume and mikan? They're truly natsume, mikan and tsubasa.. good job!

oh! I KNOW! you should make a bonus chapter to show Mikan's reaction when she wakes up!
~RWC

Aw cute, haha ninja steal!! That is so Natsume XD And I bet he just acts like she got in there all on her own in the morning as well XDD

cute

Ah! That was super cute! I really liked it. Awesome job!

Cant you make a sequel about when they wake up. Also Tsubasas comment “You want to sleep with Mikan-chan don’t yoou??” was perfect. your stories are really great.

s c h w e e e e e t t t ... *sigh* mAke more.. ;) i love it when nAtsume's jeAlous of tsubAsA.. ;) ehehehe

"the floor is hard and cold,"
"I’m your senpai you know,"
“Brat,”

etc. You can't end it with a comma... you need to use ellipses (...) or just a period (.).

Hopefully you can make that change. I love the ending.

please make a TsubasaxMisaki fanfic story, i really like it! >.

The ending was really cute.

It's actually one of the better stories on this site. Everyone's in-character and it was a lot of fun to read jealous Natsume. Tsubasa is freakin' awesome. :D