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Rogue7
2009-10-18 . chapter 11
I'm saddened to see this here, but I did enjoy re-reading it :)
Innortal
2009-10-17 . chapter 11
Wondered when this would make the rounds, excellent work as always.
borg rabbit
2009-10-17 . chapter 11
Interesting storylette. And, you say you don't want to continue it. Kind of saddens me. Oh well thanks for doing that much.
Ciao
Skye Silverwing
2009-10-17 . chapter 11
Didn't you do this one as its own fic already? Oh, well. You have enough other fics to work on, I suppose...
Dragon Man 180
2009-10-16 . chapter 11
Very nice. I would like to see more of Ranma's antics at Hogwarts with the Marauders around.
yellulhchicken
2009-10-16 . chapter 11
I think that a Ranma as slytherin is appropriate. It's all in how you justified it in the story. Ranma could be slytherin or gryfindor. either or. I wonder, how will faux react to Ranma's precence? he after all kind of 'killed' a phoenix.
enderverse
2009-10-16 . chapter 11
I think he should have eaten some mushrooms. I am pretty sure that Ranma is as stereotypical a Gryffindor as it is possible to get. I guess that Slytherin will probably work better for the plot if you are making Snape a major character.
FluffyNevyn
2009-08-25 . chapter 10
This definately has a lot of potential. I would recommend giving backstory in flashbacks, either dreams or PTSD style memory immersions. By backstory I mean that at this point we have no clue how the story migrated from Ranma Canon to Where this chapter starts it at. Shouldn't really take more than 3 or 4 flashes. The major events only, maybe more for character development as needed. Could do it in 1 really, if you wanted to, a good solid dream sequence of the major event, with a wake up remembering the aftermath sequence (god bless re-usable tropes).

Love the idea though, And i haven't watched/read any of the BGC stuff, i guess i should if i really want to enjoy this fic =D
chris
2009-08-15 . chapter 10
facinating..
Firehedgehog
2009-08-03 . chapter 10
very nice
Tangent
2009-08-03 . chapter 10
Well, I like the set up, and if you've got plans for this one, I certainly look forward to seeing more of Ranma, the assault/infiltration boomeroid, whether in here or split off into it's own story. :D
Rogue7
2009-08-03 . chapter 10
Interesting start, deffinately spikes the curiosity meter
Darchias
2009-08-02 . chapter 10
I like it. I think you could do great things with this one weebee.
menosay
2009-08-01 . chapter 10
Very nice, much potenal please do turn into a full fic.
zmz1999
2009-08-01 . chapter 10
Write it.

There's not enough BGC/Ranma crossovers out there. Interesting premise. So much to work with. Really weird interpretation of the Jhusenkyou curse, but workable. So will Ranma respond to the Overmind control box now?
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