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Spaz
2009-07-27 . chapter 5
Wow, this was short and... sweet...? Well, good anyway, in a freaky way. I don't understand how Megavolt got his powers, though. I laughed so hard when he said "I fried him like a chicken".
fanfictionfan123
2007-03-31 . chapter 2
Makes me think of the beginning of Halloween.A killer at such a young age.Did he kill his own parents, too?
LuvvyDuck
2007-03-30 . chapter 5
Omahgawsh! Stephen King would be proud, Kitty! Jack was one scary little guy, wasn't he? And I felt so sorry for Elmo.
I loved the treatment you gave J. Gander and Gryz, too. You should be proud of yourself, hon-this story really kicks butt! ^_^
LordNegaduck
2007-01-22 . chapter 5
As always another great chapter and wrap up to this introduction to the Trials of the Hero! Another Perfect Job!
Anna McNarin
2007-01-16 . chapter 5
Praise to you and the wonderful people who brought our cartoon heros and villains to life.
Fire From Above
2007-01-11 . chapter 5
It's a great setup. You really know how to prime anticipation. Good luck with your muse.
Heide DeVries
2007-01-10 . chapter 5
Wonderful conclusion. Though I don't know if Hooter is right or not, does Bud know when to die? c.c; I kind of like Bud Flood, so I kind of hope he doesn't. Heh. This was a great 'filler' (as you call it), and I look forward to more from you. (I still need to catch up and read your others v.v; sorry.)
Nightw2
2007-01-10 . chapter 5
Hey there, icequeenkitty. All I have to say is I did greatly enjoy your wrap-up to this piece. I mean, it have great inner thought showing, exchanges and dramatic foreshadowing. Thanks very much for writing this.
acosta perez jose ramiro
2007-01-10 . chapter 5
Nice scene between Hooter and Griz, and the old bird is sadly wrong; Bud doesn't know how to stay dead.

Keep the good writing.
Oustiti
2007-01-10 . chapter 5
Liqui dead? How? I mean to me he always seemed quite immortal as he's a water.
gosalyngirl
2007-01-09 . chapter 4
Of course you know that you are setting the stage for one kick ** finale. Trials of the Hero is eagerly anticipated. Keep up the excellent work on this new "darker" side of DWD. So far you've made some stories that are impossible to put down (or close my laptop screen, if you will). Beyond the fact that the characters are amazing and the story is wonderfully detailed and gripping, I must note that you turned a relatively benign and idiotic villian like Quackerjack into a truly freakish and formidable villian. Awesome!
Oustiti
2007-01-08 . chapter 1
I think it's a very clever choice picking QJ's voice actor as his real name. You always manage to pick good names for him.
Fire From Above
2007-01-07 . chapter 4
You write beautifully. I've written that before, but I just had to say it again.
Fire From Above
2007-01-07 . chapter 3
Ack, this excites me!
Fire From Above
2007-01-07 . chapter 2
Well, wasn't he quite the creepy little kid. Quite disturbing, I liked it.
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