YAY! VERY GREAT WRITING!

wow..that was...H.O.T.

awesome job!! love it!

Another author requested this story and so I decided to read it and I think it was really good. I love how cute Shika and Ino are. So adorable. Great job and I'm glad it turned out to be InaxShika instead of whatever you had originally planned. Great job!

hey! your writing as graet as ever but id like to make some points here i meen your writing style is very diffrent it brilliant yet i can help but ask if you could tidy the plot alittle i meen theres nothing wrong with the pairing but it just seems like just another day a simple kiss and the sex its not that belivable really .i thing there should be series of events leading up to that maybe a couple of days or so .any way over all the storys really good .umm id like your advice on a story im writing its a sasuxsaku pairing and it set after sasuke supposedly comes back and its set really when they are on a mission they try to oviode each other and so on. yet this plot has been used meny meny times and is getting sorta old althuogh my fanfic has aa certain humor to it its still not as i eye catching as any of the others what would you put in this story to twist the plot slightly i was thinking of making it ass a sort of comady making fun of the overly used plot but iv got writers block and it sucks .do you have any advice on this or any ideas.awaiting your reply by email .uk) or review

M.A UCHIHA

cutest.thing.ever

aw

love this pairing...good job! :)

Oh.My.God! OO I loved it! Completly loved it ^^ it's so good written and the feelings almost shines through the screen...
Okay, Aysia, shut up! xD but it's a really good story

this was actually really good, I think the way you wrote it was wonderful and it wasn't awkward but loving in a way.

good job.

YAY! i like i liek!! *like!

Oww, how cute!!
Is soo lovely this story^^Congrats.!

kawai!

hehe ^-^

I liked it! It was cute!

awesome !!

very good i think you should do more one shots