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spookysister7
2008-01-09 . chapter 2
aww. luv it. Victory or Death coming soon?
gabumon
2007-01-19 . chapter 2
SEQUEL WORTHY. cant wait
Aurelia30
2007-01-15 . chapter 2
You named this chapter well! And Rodney's finally found a woman he can't resist! I have the feeling that she'll feature in some of your stories in the future as she grows up. I hope so!
Random Clone
2007-01-11 . chapter 2
Wonderful! Wonderful!! I loved it!
Oh, and yes, Taz, a sequel would be fantabulous!
Random Clone
2007-01-11 . chapter 1
The best line of the entire chapter is “Okay, I get it, you’re alive. Now go back to sleep, will you?”

Hahaha!! Hysterical! Kandosii, Tazmy!
LilRicki
2007-01-10 . chapter 2
That was wonderful. Especially the last line - made me go "aw." :-)

Very sweet - but not too sweet. Good job!

- LilRicki
Llanea
2007-01-10 . chapter 2
Oh no fair! Rodi's supposed to keep the kid and do the daddy thing(cries), still great story.
KathyBrown
2007-01-10 . chapter 2
Oh, that was SO sweet. Almost had me tearing up. So cute... I loved how Rodney reacts - and Carson and Teyla, too. Thanks for the beautiful second chapter!
Mercury's Winter
2007-01-09 . chapter 2
Aww! That was so sweet! Perfectly in character too :D I would love to see another follow up *bg* Rodney was gone for six weeks, there's gotta be more to it than that *innocent smile* Awesome job, thanks!
dahan
2007-01-09 . chapter 2
Hmm, the "The End" tag says this is over and done with hmm?

Beautifully written, the descriptions were just vivid, especially the feelings of warmth that eminating from Rodney. I guess we'll just have to fill in the blanks as to what the rest of this story was about ourselves. Nicly done! ^_^
Hettie
2007-01-09 . chapter 2
Perfect. I can so envision this!
Thanks for sharing
Olinne
2007-01-09 . chapter 2
That's so cute ! Thanks for it! I hope there will be a sequel ! !
sablecain
2007-01-09 . chapter 2
Yay! So glad you continued it. I like this. I like that you didn't have Rodney keep her even though a part of him wanted to. Its more realistic like this and just beautifully bittersweet!
Gremblin
2007-01-09 . chapter 2
aw!! That's so sweet! I was hoping that Rodney would keep Angela, but this works out nicely. It's so sweet! great job! Nice ending. can't help but wonder if Rodney ever went out to visit Angela. Just... make up an excuse that something needed fixing on the mainland and get 'sidetracked' with her. Great job!
Delka
2007-01-09 . chapter 2
Sweet.
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