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| looooooooooop 2008-02-03 ch 6, anon. | abusei like these all. |
| Hawk-Hotlips 2007-04-12 ch 6, | abuseFunny, very funny. I like the Frank ones the best. |
| firebirdgirl 2007-04-10 ch 6, | abuseIf you add Paranoid, Frank could be the eighth! Happy writing! |
| laurydory 2007-04-10 ch 6, | abuselol. How can you make me laugh so much with three short lines. Mash to a tee. |
| hawkeye-heart 'n Seoul 2007-04-09 ch 6, | abuselol!! that one is probably my favorite of them all... classic Frank and Hawkeye scene... thank you for making me laugh |
| three.steps 2007-04-09 ch 6, | abusehahaha I love it! Frank is such a twit but he sure does have some hilarious lines! hehe looking forward to more! |
| three.steps 2007-04-09 ch 5, | abuseThese are very interesting and wonderful. Nice little snippits of the 4077th. Even though they're short they are full of complexity and a much larger picture. Great job. |
| laurydory 2007-04-08 ch 5, | abuseNice, accurate little snippets of life at the 4077th. I especially liked Margaret's realisation at the end of A Little Too Late. |
| three.steps 2007-01-29 ch 3, | abuseVery nice! |
| I-Heart-MASH 2007-01-07 ch 3, | abuseLove this idea! It lets you get a lot of ideas out there without commiting to a full story. They're also a lovely combination of humour and intrigue. I'm looking forward to seeing more of these! |
| Paulina'sHM 2007-01-02 ch 3, | abuseI'm loving these so far. I especially liked this chapter... Keep it up. Paulina :-) |
| hawkeye-heart 'n Seoul 2006-12-30 ch 3, | abusegreat new scene... it made me laugh. thank you. |
| AttheSwamp 2006-12-30 ch 3, | abuseInterested to see where this heads. I especially liked the exchange between Hawkeye and Margaret. |
| hawkeye-heart 'n Seoul 2006-12-29 ch 2, | abusevery good and very in character... have you considered filling in the stories around these scenes? |