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4RT3M15
2008-03-29
ch 9,
abuseYay! as usual another excellent chapter!!
Oh, one thing, some latin translations would be good please.
My school latin has long departed my head so my rough translation of the last chapter was 'Cruel ice'. Hopefully this will convince you (out of pity if nothing else) that accurate translations are needed for the lesser known latin phrases. If you have put them up somewhere and I haven't seen them then I am truely sorry for wasting your time and my review space!!
Well done on lent, and good luck on the next chapter!
Schizophrenic Kitten
2008-03-25
ch 9,
abuseHey, i like your story. It's the first Fruits Basket Fanfiction i've ever read, and it was a good one to kick it of with. Looking forwards to more, Jaz.
sugar230
2008-03-23
ch 9,
abuseOh gosh, this story's so good!! What's Tohru hiding from Shigure? What's Kagura going to do about what she just heard? When's Hatori going back to check on Shigure and Tohru and what will be happening when he gets there? Is Tohru going to realize what she's been "dreaming"?? I just can't wait to read more please please please update soon!!
crystalfeathers
2008-03-23
ch 9,
abuseWow, there's a twist.
cm1000
2008-03-23
ch 9,
abuseIntense chapter! So much drama.

I wonder if Tohru will ever get her memories back. She's beginning to "remember" things from before, at least subconsciously. At least right now, she's safe from Akito.

I feel sorry for Kyo and I hope he gets better (though I hate for him to go back to that dreadful Cat's Room), but then reading about Yuki...it makes my heart break! How horrible for him! And what he said...*shudder* I hope that his situation does not stay the same for long.

It's good to hear that Isuzu and Kagura are doing what they can.

So, just a question...
Was Hatori in love with Tohru? Or did he love her like a family member?
Blaze83
2008-02-07
ch 8, anon.
abusePoor Kyo. I hope he'll be ok.

*sighs* I agree with Hatori. I think Shirgure is up to something. But I cant tell.

You can do what I cant. I've been thinking about giving up the internet for lent...but I just cant bring myself to do it! haha How sad it that? XD Have a good lent, and a happy easter. I look forward to the next chapter.
cm1000
2008-02-05
ch 8,
abuseWow, it has been a long time...nevertheless, it was a wonderful chapter!

First of all, I liked how you brought in Tohru's friends. It's logical that they'd be super worried about her. I loved the different picture that you presented of Tohru's cousin. Not many stories have her in them, and when they do, she's a total brat. Well, since she was a brat in the anime/manga, it figures. But still, you've given her a whole new side and I really liked it.

I liked the scenes between Shigure and Hatori. It really spelled a lot about their relationship. I personally think Tohru is better off with Shigure right now, so that Akito can't get to her. I do hope Kyo will recover soon and that Kagura isn't targeted!
crystalfeathers
2008-02-05
ch 8,
abuseLent? Not sure what that is, but happy Lent to you anyway. ^^

I didn't find it to rush, Hatori isn't ussually one to linger.
loretta537
2008-02-05
ch 8,
abuselent, how long is that? ok, i'm sure it's way to long but it's your decision. please post the day after easter.
Blaze83
2007-09-21
ch 7,
abuseYay! I was so excided when I saw this in my inbox! Sorry it took me so long to read it, I havent checked that email address in a while.

Great chapter. I cant wait for more!

you have the coolest middle name EVER btw =3
4RT3M15
2007-09-07
ch 7,
abuseThis is really good! I liked the pavement metaphor! :)
Wait! or is it simile - I always get those two confused!
Ah well, keep it up!
loretta537
2007-09-03
ch 7,
abusewhy does shigure think akito wants to hurt tohru some more? is akito a guy or a girl in this story? what's going to happen when everyone realizes that hatori, shigure, and tohru have disappeared? how did shigure's curse disappear? can this be a hatori/tohru story?
crystalfeathers
2007-08-29
ch 7,
abuse^_^
sesshi's-gurl
2007-08-28
ch 7,
abusegud story ^_^ cant wait till the next chapter :D ~*Sessi*~
dishrag-chan
2007-08-28
ch 7,
abuseAh...I'm a little confused with the last part. Were both Kagura AND Rin on the inside of the compound? Or was it Kagura only?

Could you translate the titles of the chapters please, too? Only I have no knowledge of Latin whatsoever.

I like Shigure in this. My heart burns whenever I think of him being a bastard but I don't like it when people portray him only as the funny, joking guy in the anime. The manga Shigure has more depth.

I need to rant about this, sorry- I HATE AKITO/SHIGURE. NO. JUST NO. WRONG WRONG WRONG WRONG WRONG.

That's what it is. Sorry for saying this on a review, but I have to. I think we talked on Youtube, in an Akito tribute AMV comments thingy...remember that? And I think you said you hated it too. Ugh.

Anyway, great writing, great chapter, and I hope you update soon! Oh, and I changed my name- it's just 'dishrag-chan' now.

Can we see some flashback Rin/Tohru friendship bonding? Only, I think that they are just too cute as friends.

I wonder why Shigure cares so much about Tohru, if he's free from the curse?
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