Too short. Is there a sequel? Liked it though.

Excellent

Darn the review box! Wouldn't open...but now it has.

The opening sentence is outstanding. That pulls you right in. The rest is gravy. Scrumptous and oh so good! One of your best!

I really liked this. Very interesting.

Great job! I have always loved WCW's poetry, and you have written an excellent story that just fits. There is always such pathos in the ordinary (e.g. a red weelbarrow) when it is seen in the context of a war zone. The only problem that I see is that wheelbarrows are not that easy to balance with both handles and two good arms. You might manage with one of the handles damaged and some sort of strap. Why do things like this bother me?
Good story with Rodney in good voice. You have managed to convey so much in few words. I love the last line.
Thanks for sharing.

nice little fic! Good job^^

It's amazing how a skilled writer can pack so much whump into so few words. Bravo!

Kitty

Definately works. Kittens-can't stop giggling now. That an the vision of him saying that phrase. :)

Very cool story. Great descriptions. I'd love to see Carson's face as Rodney wheels off "Luggage.Kittens.Lambs".

Great one shot. I think that the length was perfect, the writing allowing you to understand how Rodney was feeling and yet not painfully detailing every breathing moment as some of the really long stories do. Well done.