Bring in Kurt plz he would the story better

good. Write more Now!

Hey, pretty cool. Keep going. I'm keeping my eye out for Ch 4!

Good start. I want more!

Cool please continue, it's as good as the movie!

You've peaked my interest. I think Sentinels would be a great idea for the sequel. I hiope in future chapters you will add more details and et cetera, but this was very good for a beginning. I look forward to reading more.

Good beginning, is there more coming?

I hope you write more chapters soon. This was just TOO short for me.

Interesting beginning, but wasn't that guy with the part being unnecessarily sneaky. No one would know that something was going on if he hadn't been running across roofs in a cloak-and-dagger fashion.

ooooh James Marsden as Cyclops heh heh sorry about that! he's just such a hottie! Yeah I think that pple might want the Sentinals as de bad guys but I think that Sinister should be the bad guy and that they should also bring in Gambit but instead they have to bring in Beast!

Heh I hope to see more of this story up soon!

Pretty good so far. Keep going.

So cool introducing the Sentinals. But shouldn't this fanfic be in the Movie catagory?

Thats good planning, but I heard from sources that the Second X-Men will kinda followmuch as the Star Trek movies did. No one remembers the plot of the first, the second blew cenimas outta the water, and someone died,the third brought back the dead cariter, which flows right into the Phoenix Saga for X-Men. I'd love to see more of your movie ideas though! They're very interesting. Yer ol' pal, The Bud.

I neeeeeeeddddd action! I hope the actual sequel is longer than this, but it is good. More, yes? Introduce some new characters too, this has a good beginning.