It wasn't so bad. Don't say that you're not a good writer because you're really good!!

The only thing I have a problem with is that, why would you want to write about Danny Phantom? I am a band geek, as well, and I hate the show for making fun of band geeks! =/

it was nice.

Oh, I liked the end! That was good.

cool/sad story! YAY! i liked it!:) ;) :P ;P :D ;D

I like the ending. Perfectly worded. Keep up the good work.