|Reviews for Realization|
| wolfraven80 1/8/10 . chapter 2
*randomly reading older chapter*
Poor Seth. He's so serious. I love that. But now I want to know exactly what Eirika's "dreamed-of" reaction was. Oh never mind... I'll just imagine it for myself. ;)
| Clearwinter 8/2/09 . chapter 1
Sounds nice. The fluff actually adds a sensative touch. not everything has to be dry and skim like milk. haha. Just kidding.
Ahem. Anyways, I like reading things that have that little extra bit in it. There isn't too much filler and that's what makes a good author.
| RWT 7/21/09 . chapter 23
Because we all need a little fluff in our lives.
-Yes very much. Yey marriedSethxEirika XD!
| Maxmagnus20019 7/17/09 . chapter 23
Not bad at all... I don't have much to say about this one.
Keep up the good.
| Diedre D'Nai 7/14/09 . chapter 1
Cute, more please.
| Silvara 7/14/09 . chapter 23
Nice, grand, deep. Sounds somehow true.
| Silvara 7/14/09 . chapter 21
So swet! XD
| wolfraven80 7/13/09 . chapter 23
I just love this. It's so cute, especially the last bit. I really can't think of anything coherent to say, just aw.
| Maxmagnus20019 6/26/09 . chapter 22
How tragic, it must indeed be very difficult to lose someone you've devoted your entire life to, this captures the emotion rather well, considering Eikira's circumstances and past.
Keep up the good work.
| Johsn 5/26/09 . chapter 2
it sucks like hell asshole
| Maxmagnus20019 1/12/09 . chapter 21
Good chapter, very nicely done shorty xD
Keep up the good work!
| Maxmagnus20019 1/12/09 . chapter 20
Aw, so hard for her.
Seth's death would truly be a loss for the heart of Eirika, after all she's been through D
| MeowSap 9/14/08 . chapter 21
Very, very nice... :) I'm happy to see this updated!
The detail was excellent. And I really liked the ending too! Very sweet, good job, as always. :D
| Nagasasu 9/14/08 . chapter 21
The first sentence sounds like Seth's POV, but the last sentence in that paragraph made me wonder if it was Eirika's. Obviously the question was decided in the next paragraph where Eirika says "a man."
Then again, you had me (at hello. just kidding) with the first line. Totally sucked in at that point.
There are times when I wonder if this is AU or not. When Eirka says things like "and I guess I was" and "I guess you take this as an invitation" and it almost breaks the tone (which is rather distracting). "So how did we end up here?" almost suffers the same problem; almost. If this is in-game it's not something a noblewoman would say. It seem strange to have words like "innocuous" thrown in with casual words like "I guess." But if this is AU it's fine; that’s normal in our time period.
But back to the shiny polished words I like. "Doubting myself, feeling tongue-tied." "reveling in your warmth and newness," love 'newness.' If I could write on this, these lines would have lots and lots of hearts drawn in by them.
"sliding my hand across your back" makes me think Seth's shirtless. :b A chapter with a shirtless Seth would totally pwn. (reviewer drools some more)
"and my lips part under yours." I don't know how to say this: there seems to be underlying sexuality underneath such an innocent statement?
"I haven’t the faintest idea of what I’m doing." WAFF.
"And then you smile." More hearts scribbled next to this. Perfect way to end. More doodled in hearts.
I really like the tone of this. There's something very polished about it compared to both other writers and your own usual style of writing. That's really all I'm capable of saying. Everything binds itself together quite well, and... ok, I give up trying to explain how much I love this. So although I've claimed the chapter with Seth counting cars to be my favorite, this one has totally completely de-throned it.
(Insert more hearts here) (reviewer throws self at authoress and hugs her for writing such awesomeness) (draws more hearts)
| wolfraven80 8/1/08 . chapter 20
Aww that was sad. Nicely done though. I'm going to have to go and write some fluff now...
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