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wolfraven80 2008-08-01 ch 20,	abuseAww that was sad. Nicely done though. I'm going to have to go and write some fluff now... Congrats on hitting 100+ reviews!
renaisrider 2008-07-31 ch 1,	abuseOk, I dont't like posting tons of reviews, but I commented after chapter 17 and I just have to comment on the last chapter... Seth! get over yourself! It is so Seth to give in and then leave because of his "duty". Sometimes I feel like smacking him and telling him to just get over all his ideas of duty and station and marry her... but then he wouldn't be Seth if he didn't have angst about it. As usual, great style in your writing and (what a surprise!) angst was well done. good job!
renaisrider 2008-07-31 ch 17,	abuseWow, I really liked the way you used car counting as a refrain in this one.p I find your stories really different because of the poetic style you have and I love it. keep it up! PS- Is this story also supposed to be Seth and Eirika? In modern-day?
Talren 2008-07-31 ch 20,	abuseYes, I do have a tendacy to pay attention to detail. Sometimes a bit TOO much. It has its up and down sides I supose... Oh, this was a nice one. Short, but too a good effect. It has a tone of remebrance with a nice bit of melancholiness. My, you seam to like writing angst don't you?
Nagasasu 2008-07-29 ch 20,	abuseOh, very, very, very good. One of your best chapters so far. From the first line, I thought he was dead, but ... Oh goodness, stupid Seth! "When she wakes up and finds herself alone in her suddenly too-large bed..." and reaches out, really really like the image there. The concept of a too-large bed makes me think they were married, but that doesn't fit with Seth's personality. I guess since Eirika's a queen she'd have a big bed anyway. I'm assuming this is post-game? It seems rather OOC for Seth to sleep with her and THEN dump her. I can only assume he's angsting a great deal at this point. And hopefully all the angst will lead to him deciding they're meant to be together. X) I also like the repitition between the first and last line. Anyways, yes. WONDERFUL chapter!
Nagasasu 2008-07-29 ch 19,	abuseI like the concept of communicating through flowers. Not my favorite chapter, but it's good. Sorry for the late reviewing! Oh, and I would like to state again that a romance novel by Seth would be the most ingenious plot bunny ever. XD
Ivaldi 2008-07-29 ch 20,	abuseThat was really sad, In a good way. That's all I can really say about that, I would like to say more but.. That's really all there is too it. Good work.
wolflover765 2008-05-21 ch 19,	abuseYou've got a nice story going on here. And even though Fire Emblem SS is like the only FE game I know of, I still like this pairing and this story. Please continue to try and complete this story cause it's really, really, really good. Please continue!
Talren 2008-05-17 ch 19,	abuseAh, more interactions between Eirka and Tana. Gotta love the lightheartedness. I can just imagine the two looking up flower language in an attempt to find the right message. Characterization wise, you nailed both of them dead on. Eirika is not so willing to adimit her feelings toward Seth while Tana is a bit childish but has a sense of perspectiveness. There's only one minor quirk: [“Tana, the first time you met Ephraim, we were four, and you yelled at him because he kept sticking frogs in your hair.”] From Ephraim/Tana B support: Tana: Ephraim, do you remember when we first met? Ephraim: ... Ah, of course! It was at Castle Frelia, wasn't it? Erika and I had been invited to visit for your birthday celebration. Tana: Oh, I'm so glad you remembered! Ephraim: King Hayden seemed so delighted that we'd come to visit. I think that was the first time I met Innes, too. Tana: So, Ephraim, what did you think of the dress I was wearing? Ephraim: I... Hm... I'm sorry, but I don't think I got a good look at it at the time. Perhaps you don't remember, but as soon as I arrived, Innes challenged me. We ended up having an archery match right when the party began. I think Innes won that match. Tana: Do you remember my hair? I was so happy with it! Ephraim: Your... hair? Uh... Well, right after our archery match, Innes challenged me to the spear. I think I won that match! Tana: I'll bet you don't even remember what I said afterward! Ephraim: Er, Innes can be persistent. After spears we moved on to jousting. That time, I think it was... Tana: Oh, you! You only remember what happened with my brother! You don't care about me at all, do you? I wouldn't think young Ephraim would be so rash to put frogs in Tana's hair on her birthday, even if he were, I don't think Innes would be too happy about that. Also, it apeares Ephraim was a tad occupied contesting with Innes at their first meeting. Besides that rather minor point, nice job with another piece.
Silvara 2008-05-13 ch 19,	abuseLovely! :)
Maxmagnus20019 2008-05-12 ch 19,	abuseWow... so beautifal and proper xD Very good work, good keep up the great work! =D
wolfraven80 2008-05-12 ch 19,	abuseMan I love the way you write Tana! This piece is brilliant and it’s wonderful to see you writing something so lighthearted and off the beaten path for FE. And you finally squeezed Ephraim/Tana in there too! So cute! I love that Tana can tell how Eirika feels about Seth, and Tana’s flower choices do seem quite apropos. Love it! You could do a sequel where Seth receives the flowers and has to try to figure out what to make of them. I can just see him flipping through the flower manual, poor dear.
Silvara 2008-04-27 ch 18,	abuseXDD Okay! If he does write, better spare me a copy of his work!
Kaira Sakamoto 2008-04-25 ch 18,	abuseWow. Just simply, wow. If only I could tell if it were an AU or not. There were a few words here and there that helped me understand that it was not, in fact, an AU, but rather set in its usual time period. But, still. This fanfiction is great. There are times when I wish you would write more, but then, when I go back and re-read what you wrote, I realize that short, sweet, and to the point is what most fanfictions with this pairing seem to have. Not to mention that to come up with a plot for every single update that is still in character, and different for each part...well, I find it amazing. I've noticed that you have many updates from Seth's point of view. I wonder how you would do if you were to write something from Ephraim's point of view, looking in on the relationship of the knight and princess. (Ahh, the classics. Can't live without them.) Adding Tana in this little chappie was a good thing. Friendly jibs are a big yes-yes in friendships, and they usually help you realize something that you never thought before. (I know that many of my characters have that happen to them - they're just so dense sometimes, that they need someone to bonk them over the head and scream at them.) Anyways, on to the point. I liked this. This is a good. This is now on my Favorite Stories list, and now on my Story Alert list. It takes a lot for a fanfiction to get on there, so be happy. You'll see me around for other reviews when you update. ^^ Good luck. Signed, Kaira Sakamoto
JFate 2008-04-23 ch 18, anon.	abuseTipping her head back so she was staring at the sky, Tana sighed again. “If he wrote a romance novel, I’d read it.” -That's kinda hard to imagine but might be fun if he did XP.

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