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| CSI junkie 247 2008-04-02 ch 64, | abuseCeesau=Amazing. I will go to a concert anywhere within 2 hours driving of my house. So lets hope they come to NYC that's only about 2 with the ferry and then a little more to drive into the city itself. I forgive you for killing off Alejandro because it's keeping me wondering. I can't wait to meet these evil new bosses. Another great chapter, keep 'em coming. |
| Soccer-Bitch 2008-04-02 ch 64, | abuseGREAT CHAPTER! hehehe |
| Axellia 2008-04-01 ch 64, | abuseI can't believe this story is over - it's been in my life for so long! (Either that or time has really flown by) I've become really invested in Cory as an OC, so I am happily awaiting new chapters to beta! Woot - one more day till a new eppy -> I'm really dancing happy about that. |
| Axellia 2008-04-01 ch 63, | abuseI think I'm almost developing Stockholm Syndrome for Alexis' kidnapper - I was almost sorry to see Montoya die. Though I can promise that I certainly won't be feeling the same for Etienne. |
| laplandgurl 2008-04-01 ch 64, | abuseI'm so glad that Cory's mom was found and that she survived - looking forward to the sequel. Real life sucks sometimes when it gets in the way of writing - doesn't it. |
| Aphina 2008-04-01 ch 64, | abuseHey. I love this chapter because it has everything, action, suspense and relef. You can feel Cory's emotions at the news that her mother;s aklive and well and it huits us hard. The last section promises bigger and better things makeing us more on edge. I can't wait for tyhe sequel! |
| Madison Bellows 2008-03-31 ch 64, | abuseI think this was a great ending, but I am glad it is not really an ending, because I want more Cory! I am also super excited about Wednesday night with both new CM and CSI:NY (like reserved the tv, threatened death if my DH makes plans for us excited). I know things are still not going to be easy for Cory, but I am glad she is coming back. Yea for muses coming home to roost. |
| katydid13 2008-03-31 ch 64, | abuseGood job! I can't wait for the next story! |
| Aphina 2008-03-26 ch 63, | abuselmao I know I couldn't help it, i thouhgt he's automatically know when his cell phone was going to go off so why not use that. I love thsi chapter, because its full of action and suspense and it kept me absolutely rivetted. I think the way you showed Alexis's relationship top M was fantsatic and brought home what tney used to have. |
| CSI junkie 247 2008-03-25 ch 63, | abuseI loved this chapter. I was actually starting to like Alejandro, compared to Etienne he's a nice person. I can't wait for the sequel. Lastly, I thank you for getting Alexis off that boat, however i have a feeling she's not in the clear, and neither is Cory. As for Ceesau, I love there music, Carmine is icing on the cake (very hott icing) |
| Bec0512 2008-03-24 ch 63, | abuseWOW, i really wasn't expecting that, looking forward to more. :) |
| Soccer-Bitch 2008-03-24 ch 63, | abusegreat chapter. i liked it. ^_^ i leave wed. flight is at 6:10am i pack tomorrow after i do laundry. feel free to message me any time. i have enjoyed talking to you. |
| Madison Bellows 2008-03-24 ch 63, | abuseAh and oh and wow! Great action and foreshadowing. I am looking very much forward to the sequel. And once again, if I stumble across your muse, I'll send her packing back home. Good luck on all your writing! |
| CSI junkie 247 2008-03-22 ch 62, | abuseThe 2 month lapse made things fit together. You write the relation ship portions really well. An after reading your AN I have to say this. My Ceesau CD came today, and it is amazing, I am praying they do a concert on the east coast someday. |
| Aphina 2008-03-21 ch 62, | abuseI ove ths chapter becaue it preempts what's a head and I love the fact they don't realize that they've been over heard, it makes a good mystery for the audience. its nice to see her make up with the girls, it shows us multiple views and I lvoe Danny's sleepy Whzamater! it's so typically Danny. |