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CSI junkie 247
2008-04-02
ch 64,
abuseCeesau=Amazing. I will go to a concert anywhere within 2 hours driving of my house. So lets hope they come to NYC that's only about 2 with the ferry and then a little more to drive into the city itself. I forgive you for killing off Alejandro because it's keeping me wondering. I can't wait to meet these evil new bosses. Another great chapter, keep 'em coming.
Soccer-Bitch
2008-04-02
ch 64,
abuseGREAT CHAPTER!
hehehe
Axellia
2008-04-01
ch 64,
abuseI can't believe this story is over - it's been in my life for so long! (Either that or time has really flown by) I've become really invested in Cory as an OC, so I am happily awaiting new chapters to beta!

Woot - one more day till a new eppy -> I'm really dancing happy about that.
Axellia
2008-04-01
ch 63,
abuseI think I'm almost developing Stockholm Syndrome for Alexis' kidnapper - I was almost sorry to see Montoya die.

Though I can promise that I certainly won't be feeling the same for Etienne.
laplandgurl
2008-04-01
ch 64,
abuseI'm so glad that Cory's mom was found and that she survived - looking forward to the sequel. Real life sucks sometimes when it gets in the way of writing - doesn't it.
Aphina
2008-04-01
ch 64,
abuseHey. I love this chapter because it has everything, action, suspense and relef.

You can feel Cory's emotions at the news that her mother;s aklive and well and it huits us hard. The last section promises bigger and better things makeing us more on edge. I can't wait for tyhe sequel!
Madison Bellows
2008-03-31
ch 64,
abuseI think this was a great ending, but I am glad it is not really an ending, because I want more Cory! I am also super excited about Wednesday night with both new CM and CSI:NY (like reserved the tv, threatened death if my DH makes plans for us excited). I know things are still not going to be easy for Cory, but I am glad she is coming back. Yea for muses coming home to roost.
katydid13
2008-03-31
ch 64,
abuseGood job! I can't wait for the next story!
Aphina
2008-03-26
ch 63,
abuselmao I know I couldn't help it, i thouhgt he's automatically know when his cell phone was going to go off so why not use that.

I love thsi chapter, because its full of action and suspense and it kept me absolutely rivetted. I think the way you showed Alexis's relationship top M was fantsatic and brought home what tney used to have.
CSI junkie 247
2008-03-25
ch 63,
abuseI loved this chapter. I was actually starting to like Alejandro, compared to Etienne he's a nice person. I can't wait for the sequel. Lastly, I thank you for getting Alexis off that boat, however i have a feeling she's not in the clear, and neither is Cory.

As for Ceesau, I love there music, Carmine is icing on the cake (very hott icing)
Bec0512
2008-03-24
ch 63,
abuseWOW, i really wasn't expecting that, looking forward to more. :)
Soccer-Bitch
2008-03-24
ch 63,
abusegreat chapter. i liked it. ^_^
i leave wed. flight is at 6:10am
i pack tomorrow after i do laundry.
feel free to message me any time. i have enjoyed talking to you.
Madison Bellows
2008-03-24
ch 63,
abuseAh and oh and wow! Great action and foreshadowing. I am looking very much forward to the sequel. And once again, if I stumble across your muse, I'll send her packing back home. Good luck on all your writing!
CSI junkie 247
2008-03-22
ch 62,
abuseThe 2 month lapse made things fit together. You write the relation ship portions really well. An after reading your AN I have to say this. My Ceesau CD came today, and it is amazing, I am praying they do a concert on the east coast someday.
Aphina
2008-03-21
ch 62,
abuseI ove ths chapter becaue it preempts what's a head and I love the fact they don't realize that they've been over heard, it makes a good mystery for the audience. its nice to see her make up with the girls, it shows us multiple views and I lvoe Danny's sleepy Whzamater! it's so typically Danny.
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