poor cloud. but cute :)

Wow, and they did all that in front of everybody?! Man, poor Cloud... but I'be got to say I liked what was done to him... even though I pity him XD Hm, and Vincent just cleaned him XD

The song I'll be ok by Limp Bizkit fits this fic very well. You can youtube it if you wish, this was very well done.

Poor cloud. I wish this happened to a girl and his fate isn't that bad.

*pr*
Cloud-torture is so bad, but so delicious...
'twas beautifully written

I read, I looked to the right, no choice to Chapter two, I clicked back, I came back, and realized.

=O


Nu!

I think the most effective part of this piece is the last two lines! Very good. I loved it!

Oh, I do love it when darling Sephiroth gets all possessive like this. Poor Cloudy =[
And this was very finely written, kudos to you ^^

Love the mind control thing. Great job!

VERY sexy!! I mean WOAH! This was AWESOME! You have the characters PERFECTLY in character!! This was AMAZING!! I LOVED it!! It had so much emotion and POWER to it!! LOVE IT!! XD

Hoshit.

hmm... If I would've known better I'd that say this fic is inspired by a doujinshi right? XD hehe. Or maybe I could be wrong.

Although, I kinda like that Cloud's not resisting to Sephiroth's advances. Cid and Barette are stupid there. XP heheh. Go Vincent! To the rescue!

you so need to write a serious SephCloud fic, darling, this ficlet was wonderful

Very creepy, you showed the desperation and the conflict in Cloud very well.

Liked the idea of Cloud being spared, that's a new one... as well as how you introduced Vincent.

Did I mention very creepy? XD Can't go wrong there.

ah yes, cloud as a puppet. the fact that sephiroth treats him the way he does doesn't make me love sephi any less though. it was very good, though i wish there was more to it.