Very good, I love it! :)

there friend walk in on them thats so fuuny

but now i wish i a girlfriend i yuri

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! I can't believe nobodys made this into a yuri lemon fanfic until now xD mmm delicious yuri...

This one is SO fun, the pair NagisaxHonoka kills me and this fanfic is one of my favorites. Good job there. We need more Pretty Cure fanfics! See ya

poor Hikari! lol that was cute

I'm not a huge fan of Honoka/Nagisa, but that was still adorable all the same :)

Loved it!

I laughed so hard when Nagisa said "Slide back up, baby" XD

xD

thats damn cool

haaha nice

I really liked this story! you are a good writer! and I always wanted to read a scene like this with Nagisa and Honoka! thanks a lot! keep it up please!

“Where’s my bra?” Honoka asked suddenly, looking around.

“LA LA LA LA LA!”

classic

OMG I love the ending it made me lmao the whole thing was so kawaii you rock for making some pretty cure yuri _ keep it up dude you rock \m/

WOW! Amazing, simple amazing, like always…

After reading your Nanoha/Yuuno fanfic, I was wondering what kind of series you like to fandom, I’m glad for my curiosity. This is the first time I read a good Nagisa/Honoka fanfic. You know, back then when my brain still can manage to came up with some ideas, I tried to write soft lemons like this one, at least using gentle words and actions. That’s why I liked very much this one.

Have you ever tried to do a Nanoha/Fate lemon? We need some _

Well, if I read one, is fear to read more; especially more Nagisa/Honoka

Gokuro Sama deshitta

Kawai!

It's really cute!

...and where's my bra? (Smirk)

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Satashi-san your story it's really great!

li la li la lol :)