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mahsa
2009-09-09 . chapter 3
I forgot to add it to my favorites...
mahsa
2009-09-09 . chapter 2
I really like this one... I like AJ Hopps:P He's awesome...
ProudlyIrish
2009-06-02 . chapter 9
This was hilarious, i love bitchy peyton lol, i so wish she had done that in season 1 :D
You should write a sequel its really good, i want to see more lucas/peyton and AJ/Brooke. Did Brooke and Peyton ever make up though?
xxcrimsonorchidxx
2008-11-25 . chapter 1
WoW! This story was amazing. I loved every word of it. It kept me at the edge of my seat the whole time.
rosieloves23
2008-06-18 . chapter 1
this is one of my all time favourite stories- i love it- love angry peyton and then the lucas becoming worthy! LOVE it!
allovertheplace
2008-06-08 . chapter 9
very cute!

if you ever think about writing an orignial story.. you should totally go with AJ *sighs* you're great at writing bad boys :D
spotsunshine
2008-05-04 . chapter 9
i loved this story!
and i loved the whole aj character.


good work.
SoTwisted.
2007-11-30 . chapter 8
love this story so far, only one more chapter to go :)
as i've said before, your stuff is amazing :)

oh and btw, nathan is not ogre, i love him :p lol
coopNchino
2007-09-27 . chapter 9
ok, first of I really love your stories not just this one all of them and yes I know I never reviewed before so I guess that technically makes me a lurker :)
Anyway I got a question for you or a request really and I totally understand if you say no. I've written a R/M story or started to write but i'm totally stuck so I wondered if you'd mind r/r it maybe give a tip or some constructive criticism. I'd really appreciate it and I now it's not the greatest fanfic out there so no hard feelings if you don't do it.

BTW I love A.J and I know your not supposed to but he's just so...:D
othx3BRUCAS
2007-09-13 . chapter 9
hey my names nikki, great fic christina! im so happy with the ending x3
-nikki
ps. please r&r my fic not just another love story. thanks in advance anyone who does this!
EugeneElizabeth3
2007-07-12 . chapter 9
Aww, she likes kissing him!

Loved the reference to the WB, lol.

By the way, in spite of your obvious dislike for Shakespeare, it worked. I love that AJ is one of the 'gang' now instead of Jake. He's nice to look at and all, but I find Jake incredibly boring at times.

Christina, this story was amazing, I truly loved it and genuinely think this is the way it should have gone on the show, although considering the show's penchant for drama, it clearly wouldn't have just went four seasons with Leyton, lol! Anyways, I'm now addicted and can't wait to read more of your work!
EugeneElizabeth3
2007-07-12 . chapter 8
Is it wrong that I'm strangely attracted to AJ, despite the fact he's ficticious? And that I kind of wanted him and Peyton to kiss back there? I'm supposed to be a die-hard Leytoner! What the hell's happening to me?! Lol!

By the way, the IM conversation was so adorable! Whenever I try to write nice scenes, it just comes out incredibly cheesy. Congratulations, you mastered the art ...
EugeneElizabeth3
2007-07-11 . chapter 6
WHO are AJ's sources? Because he hears a shitload of rumours! Lol!
EugeneElizabeth3
2007-07-11 . chapter 4
I LOVE this 'making them jealous' stuff! It's completely what should have happened. And AJ is a genious character, and surprisingly well-developed and likeable for an original. Good job!
EugeneElizabeth3
2007-07-11 . chapter 3
I just noticed, you're really good at making accurate metaphors and similes! I liked the one about the chess players - it's completely true. Anyway, I like this story. I actually prefer this to what really happened: Peyton should have made them grovel. I hate it when she just accepts it and pretends she's okay with it. Definitely prefer the spunky, bitchy Peyton.
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