Poor kid. Your Simone has issues if she's treatened by Claire. Even if Peter were attracted(and their chemistry is too hot for it to be otherwise) he wouldn't act on it becuase he doesn't cheat and he'd see it as taking advantage because of her youth.

So really, it would have been nice for Claire to have popped her one. Why should she have to act so mature when Simone clearly wasn't?

-Ellie

great!1

hehehe.. that was .. wow

"except totally not" -- That was so perfect! Definitely an awkward situation and I can just see Simone acting triumphant like that. Claire seemed spot on; great fic!

gr. simone should just go jump off a cliff already. i hate her soo much. stupid stupid peter.

though, despite the fact that i'm horribly ** right now, i'll admitt that the fic was still really good and even funny. bah.

Heartbreaking. Wonderfully written and bsolutely heartbreaking. If you were trying to be cruel, you certainly succeeded. I really think you need to write a sequel, in which Claire finds she has the best timing in the world. Pretty, pretty please?

Well, maybe you will, maybe you won't, either way I figured it was worth a shot ;) Thanks for the good read.

aw
i thought it was cute
reminds me of my life,
haha

x

I would've punched Simone. I actually feel like punching her everytime I see her on the TV. Grr.. She angers me. Keep this up. Hopefully Simone will be gone by the end.

Good. Very Good.

AW, poor Claire. =[ ... damn that Simone!LoL

The beauty of your fic is that the whole scene could actually happen on or screens. It's just so real. It fits right in there with the rest of the show. Are you sure you're not one of the writers under a pen name?

Aw, that was lovely. I'm liking this. More soon!

lovely job!

That was great. It was awkward in the right way, so that I could feel the awkwardness, and that to me is good writing. Amazing job, I can't wait to read more! Please update soon! And I loved the line Her heart has the absolute worst timing in the world. And just the whole last paragraph was wicked good. It had the perfect touch of teenage love, and how I would have imagined Claire's thoughts. That made me think of Matt... anyway, I really can't wait to read more!
--Ally
Oh yeah, and all the characters you've put in are so in-character I think I might cry... well, not really, but you get my point.

Hey! I reviewed your fic from the Paire LJ community. I looked for this on ffn before, but it wasn't here yet, and now it is! YAY! Now I can favorite it! Good job by the way - Peter, Claire and Simone were written marvelously, although I've told you already in my last review! Can't wait for the next update! ^^

~Jini