 SarahB0B 2009-04-10 . chapter 8Haha! I love the twins! Mix that with Katie/Oliver, and you have an awesome chapter!
I love ur title! It's really creative, and it makes sense. |
 NickyFox13 2008-06-11 . chapter 7I know...I'm up too late for my own good (it's a little after 5 oclock in the morning) and I should have reviewed this way earlier.
Anyhow, I like your prose and your characterizations in your writing. I thoroughly enjoy reading the fanfictions you create! You are extremely talented, although I'm sure you know this :D.
Well, I hope to hear more from you!
(P.S: I finally get the title of the story after long hours of thought, haha. ^_^) |
 callmefall 2008-06-04 . chapter 8Omigravy! I LOVE the last line! Hilarious! |
 callmefall 2008-06-04 . chapter 7Sweetness! Love 'Somewhere Only We Know'! Oh, and I don't think the title is lame... it's clever and goes over most people's heads, but that doesn't mean it's lame! |
 amortentiaaa 2007-09-23 . chapter 8Ch 1 - Tehe, me likey, me likey a lot.
Ch 2 - Too dark for KBOW. It's a simple kind of depressing, shallow but obviously dark.
Ch 3 - I'm kinda confused about this since he should be proud he fought. I like the title.
Ch 4 - Haha, this kinda reminds me of my own oneshot, Miracle. I wrote that a long time ago, based off a dream, but my, was this a coincidence! :P Oh well, we're both cliche. Cute title.
Ch 5 - The narration was kinda random, but amusing at the beginning. F&G are the best!
Ch 6 - Cute fluff. Scantily-dressed Cho Chang and eighty-year-old Marilyn Monroe! *hurls*
Ch 7 - Aw. Countryside beauty.
Ch 8 - So, is she pasta or pizza? Pretty boy Diggory, hah. Love the Oliver gossip. ‘Am I still allowed to say yes?’ asked a timid Scottish voice after a few seconds. HAHAHAHAHA, LOVE IT!
Still continuing, I hope? :D |
 Kailey Hamilton 2007-09-05 . chapter 8Um... I read 7th and 8th at once. The 7th one gotta be one of my favourites.
The 8th... Umm... you've written better ones. I dare say it's a little bit cliched.
I'm finally at home. I arrived today and I'm too tired to think. Kisses,
Kayi. |
 Imperial Princess 2007-09-03 . chapter 8Aww Yes, this one was even more brilliant. It tickled me hehe.
‘“Give me Wood in a kilt any day!”' Oh yes please... though the kilt's not necessary at all *cough*
So, all in all, a lovely speedy update, and I hope ours reviews make you feel a little happier! xx |
 Lady Catriona-Arre 2007-09-03 . chapter 8‘Oliver mate, your main problem is that you know nothing about girls,’ Fred informed his elder Captain, reaching over to pat his arm comradely, ‘and that being the situation, you don’t have a girlfriend, and thus, you are uptight and sexually frustrated, thus your unreasonable, Nazi-like tendencies to try and kill us daily on the Quidditch pitch.’
if only!
why isnt it as easy as this? start yelling at somebody... and then ask them out... they "timidly" i think you put it- accept and fred and george are happy.
maybe thats my problem? i need a pair of crazy redheads as accomplices? |
 FallenMystery 2007-09-02 . chapter 8*semi-hysterical laughter* okay, that was just freakin' hilarious! Good job, m'dear, good job.
FM |
 Mouse and Stupid Productions 2007-09-02 . chapter 8go percy!
Mousie |
 Mouse and Stupid Productions 2007-09-02 . chapter 6you all seem to be feeling better. I realise these were all posted before I came along, but i still like to put in my sentiments. Sorry if I'm bugging you. My mom's decided I can drink all the coffee i want (which is a lot) so, I'm kind of on a cafeen buzz.
Mousie
Oh! Great chapter! |
 Mouse and Stupid Productions 2007-09-02 . chapter 5the return of fluff! |
 NickyFox13 2007-09-02 . chapter 8I'm a bit incoherent right now, since I went away for vacation for a week, and I took a night flight. Let's just say I'm a bit delirious with tiredness...
Anyhow, I love this chapter! It is so cute. Fred and George are hilarious.
Oliver just rocks and I don't care that he is fictional and if he were a real person, he would be at least 30.
My favorite part was:
‘Ah, young love,’ commented Fred with a snigger, breaking the quiet and allowing the common room to erupt in catcalls and whistles.
‘Out with the sexually frustrated four-in-the-morning-practices and in with the weekend sleep-ins!’ agreed George excitably, as they both nodded in self-satisfaction.
...Okay, this review could have been longer, but my head is crazy right now. Will read and review previous chapter later, tomorrow most likely. Update soon! |
 Mouse and Stupid Productions 2007-09-02 . chapter 4i'm sorry for your loss. i hope everyone where you are will be able to cope.
Mousie |
 Mouse and Stupid Productions 2007-09-02 . chapter 3oh come on! The fluff is good! I have my own morbid streak, but i try not to let it tarnish a good healthy fluffy fanfic! Come on! Be happy!
oh god. i sound really annoying above. Sorry about that. Oh god. i sound peppy and - and optimistic. i am soo, so sorry.
But fluff is good! :D
Mousie |
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